As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
we are surrounded by various technological inventions today.we observe the impacts of technology in our day to day life. they have really exerted a great force in our mundane tasks and has made our life so much easy. today, we can do the task in a very short time which was supposed to be impossible previously. The prompts states that humans will gradually lose the ability to think for themselves as they rely more and more on technology to solve problems. I mostly disagree with this for this three underlying reasons.
In some cases and fields, technology has really deteriorated our ability to think for ourselves, For example, we can think of the computers. now a days, computers are too much inteligent to solve numerous problems in a very short time. they do this very precisely and chance for error is very low. they are now used in almost every field which requires very complex and tricky calculations. they have substituted human efforts, Even in many cases, they can decide which operation to do as artificial intelligent has developed so much. this task obviosly has reduced the ability for human to think for themselves. now the computers can think instead of human. however, this is partially correct. As the program of artificial intelligence is made by human and they put a lot of effort and thinking to build these sophisticated program.
however, in some fields, like medicine and health sectors, human thinking plays an important role. technology can't d much itself. they require human interference. For instance, we can take the example of determining the disease properly. it is not possible without proper knowledge in medical science and having a strong background. technology can help human but human thinking is a critical task here. because technology can't know about the wide variance of diseases and isolate them properly. human thinking and their analyzing power plays major role here.
Moreover, in some fields like economics, human have many things to think about. There are many unresolved mysteries still existing today. For example, it is very hard to predict the demand for a certain product manufactured in a certain factory properly. it is very hard to model with a particular mathematical model. it is because the process is quite random and no one can say what will be the demand of the certain product in the upcoming days. may be it still remain as dominant as today, demand for the product may deteriarate, no one can perfectly predict that. it totally depends on human thinking power to anticipate from the experience. technology alone can't solve this problem. human analysis with the great power of technology combinedly can be a very prefect match in this regard. so, dependence on technology doesn't reduce human ability for thinking in this case.
In summary, I can say that technology has enabled us to do many complicated tasks in a very easy way, they have reduced many of our efforts, at the same time, they have also given us ample time to think about the unsolved problems, to analyze them properly and critically think for the most viable solution. technology can be used only. they have not any type of inherent intelligence. human thinking power with the power of technolgy can make our life perfect. power of human thinking is always dominant and will always be in upcoming future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, still, as to, for example, for instance, in fact, in summary, in many cases, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2796.0 2235.4752809 125% => OK
No of words: 562.0 442.535393258 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97508896797 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86893614481 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6817207621 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464412811388 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 909.9 704.065955056 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 6.24550561798 368% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 20.2370786517 183% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.7437508871 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5675675676 118.986275619 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1891891892 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81081081081 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 7.80617977528 500% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220925660574 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628503099152 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061617264192 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141997951953 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431697653509 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 100.480337079 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.