As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
“Machines have taken over, the very nature of humans to solve , struggle and enjoy the fruit is being done so quickly that things are no longer enjoyable as they were”, claimed Bobby Fischer,the greatest chess player of the time in the 1990's when asked about the use of technology in his field to find best ideas . I strongly agree with the prompt that humans will have less cognitive ability if we keep indulging in the luxuries of machines to do trivial things due to the following 3 reasons.
Firstly, Thinking is the key thing that distinguishes an individual from another and converging at a conclusion to a problem can be different for each. The difference in approaches might give relatively complex insights to question about and ponder on but , when we take the support of computers or any technological device for instance and try to arrive at an answer surely , we get an answer but the approach or possibilities it might have taken will be completely blindsided to the user of the machine or apparatus.
Secondly, Artistic and sympathetic nature of humans have also aided the decisions that we take on a day to day basis for solving problems which might be diverse ranging from solving a rubix cube to the gravest problems of poverty and unemployment . If technology keeps arcaning us to solve problems in future we might give it full authority to make the right decision which it does, but whether or not it has taken ethical and moral insights into concern will be far from our grasp .
Thirdly, Humans thrive on repetition and the purpose it gives to the brain and like a sword needs a blade to sharpen we need content for our brain to process and make conclusions or relate assumptions and find the correct connections. For example , children learn alphabets and through repetition only are they able to communicate effectively their ideas and their theories , imagine a future where reliance on technology has made schools and education unwarranted . It would be disastrous for our species to survive independently.
There is also considerable good that the technology provides like connecting people across continents and has made it great for people to find their type of people i.e dating and lot more. The good that it is doing for us is also doing bad for us in terms of our ability to solve problems so, using gadgets and devices as tools to support us sparingly in making things and only using it if we really need might be the key.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2042.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 424.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81603773585 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70363942993 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537735849057 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 23.0359550562 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.8989892356 60.3974514979 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 185.636363636 118.986275619 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.5454545455 23.4991977007 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 5.21951772744 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218975472018 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868721723195 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365402769115 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119085402007 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346286461492 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 14.1392134831 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 12.1743820225 139% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.2143820225 153% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.