As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate
Technology to humankind has its advantages and disadvantages. I strongly agree with the author that when we rely more on the technology for solving the problems, the ability to solve the problem ourself decreases. With people being more dependent on the technology it is causing a lots lacking of innovation, creativity and out of the box solution. With new AI (Artificial Intelligent) being launch everyday, the problem solving and the cognitive ability of the people is started to decrease. People are using these AI to complete their work faster and more efficently but they are not understanding that by just making the AI work will not do any benefit for them. There are many such AI like CHAT GPT, CHAT with PDF, QuillBot, Grammly, and many more, which are making the daily task easier. CHAT GPT will answer all the question which are asked to it and it will answer in such a way that we would not be able to differentiate weather a human has wrote a answer or an intelligent machine. Students all around the world are using this AI to solve their homework and assignment faster. Assignment are given to understand deeper knowledge about the topic, but with the help of chat gpt, the AI it would answer the question asked in 2 seconds, and the student would just copy it. This is very harmful as the student would not learn anything from the assignment and it would be a waste. Even though a student gets A+ in the assignment but that A+ would not matter as the student has not really used his/her mind to solve it. QuillBot and Grammly are the AI from which we can correct our English sentences and grammer mistake. Student and employees use to it correct their work before submitting. This will make the student and employee lazy to learn new words and improve their grammer as they would be dependent on the AI to do their work. Before the people become more dependent on the technology for their work, people would actually spend time to correct their work and read about the project and assignment which where given to them. This would help them to increase their mind and think of solutions different than the standard solution. I am not saying that there are only disadvantages of the human being dependent on technologies. There are few advantages also like during the gulf crisis of 1991, USA launch DART software which help them to deploy the troops and plan strategies in much faster and efficient manner. If they have not used it than the same result would have taken weeks whereas with the help of the software it came out in few hours. I am just saying that people should apply their brain and mind first in solving the problem and than take help of the new technologies. If we only depend on the technology then we will become lazy and new ideas and thoughts would not come to our mind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 280, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...pendent on the technology it is causing a lots lacking of innovation, creativity and o...
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Line 1, column 398, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... AI Artificial Intelligent being launch everyday, the problem solving and the cognitive ...
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Line 1, column 509, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this AI' or 'these ais'?
Suggestion: this AI; these ais
...s started to decrease. People are using these AI to complete their work faster and more ...
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Line 1, column 577, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ork faster and more efficently but they are not understanding that by just making the AI work will no...
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Line 1, column 685, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'AIs', 'ais'?
Suggestion: AIs; Ais
...y benefit for them. There are many such AI like CHAT GPT, CHAT with PDF, QuillBot,...
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Line 1, column 948, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'written'.
Suggestion: written
...le to differentiate weather a human has wrote a answer or an intelligent machine. Stu...
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Line 1, column 954, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...differentiate weather a human has wrote a answer or an intelligent machine. Stude...
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Line 1, column 2112, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...r mind and think of solutions different than the standard solution. I am not saying ...
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Line 1, column 2651, Rule ID: AND_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...d mind first in solving the problem and than take help of the new technologies. If w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, really, second, so, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2306.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 500.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.612 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72870804502 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43668955758 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.426 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 697.5 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8163885252 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.80952381 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8095238095 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09523809524 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215555017714 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697135621966 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081704559681 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215555017714 0.150359130593 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 48.8420337079 133% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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