Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
According to the autor there is a small possibility that a person would die because of the cow flu so, there is no need of routine administeration. This argumnet lies on series of unpersuasive assumption and it is logically incorrect. This could be proved.
First, eventhough the changes of death from cow flu is less, there are some change that the resident of the area might die from these dieses. Even a death of one resident of is very harsh. It could happen that the head of the family dies, who was the only earning member, than what would happen to his/her family. Than the government would be the held responsible for the death of that person. So, by proving a inoculations against cow flu on routine admission is must as it save guards the heath of the citizen.
Secondly, if the infected person if not treated than it might be that he/she can spread the disease to a larger population, making a larger population at risk of infection. Containg a smaller area of infected people is much easier than containg a larger area of infection. So, the administration should provide inoculation even if the death rate is low.
Thirdly, if the infection is spread across a larger area than it would eventually affect the economy. The goverment would have to announce lock down to contain the infection. Lockdown would be affect all types of people, as the business and offices would be close down and the income source of the people would also be affected. It would be difficult to get daily ration. The education of the student would be at risk as the school and university would be close. So, the governemt should provide the inoculation till the flu is not over and change of spread is not there. The death of the person after the inoculation may happen due to many different reason and the government should look at a bigger picture saving the citizen, so they should provide routine inciloution. There is a real life event were the regular inoculation were not given and it lead to the lockdown of the entire world. This was due to Covid-19 virus. It started in China and was spread across the world, causing hundreds of death and loss of millons of money in the economy. Due to lack of govermennt the virus of spread and it took minimum 1-2 years for the economy to settle back on track.
So, to provide any such havock in the future, the right measure should be taken by the government. Even if there is a way of saving a life of one citizen than the government should do everthing in thier hand to do it. As all the citizen are equal for the government. The administration should allow for the routine inoculations agaist cow flu to save many lifes.
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e-rater score report
Sentence: According to the autor there is a small possibility that a person would die because of the cow flu so, there is no need of routine administeration.
Error: autor Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: administeration Suggestion: administration
Sentence: This argumnet lies on series of unpersuasive assumption and it is logically incorrect.
Error: unpersuasive Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: argumnet Suggestion: argument
Sentence: First, eventhough the changes of death from cow flu is less, there are some change that the resident of the area might die from these dieses.
Error: eventhough Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Containg a smaller area of infected people is much easier than containg a larger area of infection.
Error: containg Suggestion: contain
Sentence: So, the administration should provide inoculation even if the death rate is low.
Error: inoculation Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: The goverment would have to announce lock down to contain the infection.
Error: goverment Suggestion: government
Sentence: So, the governemt should provide the inoculation till the flu is not over and change of spread is not there.
Error: inoculation Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: governemt Suggestion: government
Sentence: The death of the person after the inoculation may happen due to many different reason and the government should look at a bigger picture saving the citizen, so they should provide routine inciloution.
Error: inciloution Suggestion: inclusion
Sentence: There is a real life event were the regular inoculation were not given and it lead to the lockdown of the entire world.
Error: inoculation Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: lockdown Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: It started in China and was spread across the world, causing hundreds of death and loss of millons of money in the economy.
Error: millons Suggestion: millions
Sentence: Due to lack of govermennt the virus of spread and it took minimum 1-2 years for the economy to settle back on track.
Error: govermennt Suggestion: government
Sentence: So, to provide any such havock in the future, the right measure should be taken by the government.
Error: havock Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Even if there is a way of saving a life of one citizen than the government should do everthing in thier hand to do it.
Error: everthing Suggestion: everything
Error: thier Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: The administration should allow for the routine inoculations agaist cow flu to save many lifes.
Error: agaist Suggestion: against
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
Read a good grammar book.
No. of Spelling Errors: 18 2
Double check spelling errors.
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 18 2
No. of Sentences: 26 15
No. of Words: 478 350
No. of Characters: 2133 1500
No. of Different Words: 207 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.676 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.462 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.5 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 142 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 88 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 54 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.385 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.631 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.423 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.274 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.467 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.094 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 572, Rule ID: SENT_START_THEM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Then'?
Suggestion: Then
...an what would happen to his/her family. Than the government would be the held respon...
^^^^
Line 1, column 667, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...he death of that person. So, by proving a inoculations against cow flu on routine...
^
Line 1, column 667, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a inoculation' or simply 'inoculations'?
Suggestion: a inoculation; inoculations
...he death of that person. So, by proving a inoculations against cow flu on routine admission is...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 733, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'saves'?
Suggestion: saves
... flu on routine admission is must as it save guards the heath of the citizen. Second...
^^^^
Line 1, column 1761, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...after the inoculation may happen due to many different reason and the government should look a...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 1976, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
...gular inoculation were not given and it lead to the lockdown of the entire world. Th...
^^^^
Line 1, column 2390, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sure should be taken by the government. Even if there is a way of saving a life of one ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.6327345309 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 12.9520958084 201% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 28.8173652695 83% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 55.5748502994 112% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 16.3942115768 134% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2177.0 2260.96107784 96% => OK
No of words: 476.0 441.139720559 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57352941176 5.12650576532 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.56307096286 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57754788306 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 204.123752495 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441176470588 0.468620217663 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 688.5 705.55239521 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.70958083832 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 19.7664670659 132% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1658636716 57.8364921388 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7307692308 119.503703932 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 23.324526521 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46153846154 5.70786347227 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 5.15768463074 19% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 6.88822355289 218% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243333276737 0.218282227539 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648547540097 0.0743258471296 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064611171985 0.0701772020484 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243333276737 0.128457276422 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0628817314937 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 14.3799401198 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 48.3550499002 145% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 12.197005988 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.5979740519 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.32208582834 89% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 98.500998004 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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