People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole.
The mindset and perspective of the public are represented by society. While there can be outliers in a society, the general thought pattern of a society can be taken as a holistic representation of the publics' mindset. The author suggests that the public attitude is determined more by their immediate surroundings and indigenous situations than by society as a whole and I disagree with this view point as a society molds the way in which a person thinks and perceives things.
Societies play a vital role in the development of thinking and perspective during the early childhood and growth phase of an individual thereby leaving a long lasting impression on the person. If a child is born in a society that respects men and women equally, provides equal opportunity to both of the genders, the child is bound to learn these traits as commonplace and will eventually treat both the genders equally. However, for someone born in primitive times, when the females of a society were not given equal freedom as today, this person would generally look down on the women in the society.
Having said that, the general attitude of a person in normal situations is defined more by the society and the impulsive attitude of a person can have more influence from the immediate surroundings. For instance, if someone has been born in a progressive society having a great diversity of cultures and religions, it can be expected of him to respect all the religions equally and show no discrimination whatsoever. However, in unprecedented situations like political instability, these individuals can be expected to break the conventional behavioral patterns and show unconventional anger or resentment.
Often times, we see the rise of a leader that proposes counterintuitive methodologies to overcome the problems at hand. These methodologies are a result of the attitude of the leader that has been developed over time by living in that society. Mahatma Gandhi proposed the path of non violence to fight the British oppression. Following the conventional trends of his immediate surroundings, he could have impulsively taken up arms and joined some militia to fight the rulers, but he chose to rely on his values and general attitude to counter the problem at hand. Eventually, his ideology became the ideology of the entire nation and turned into a mass movement.
Almost always, people rely on their normal attitude to tackle the problems that they are facing and this attitude is developed as a result of the society in general. This attitude is not based on his immediate surroundings. It is only in the case when the individual chooses to act in an impulsive manner, then the immediate surroundings and situations start to affect the attitude of the person. Only if this person continues to act impulsively for a longer duration of time, then the indigenous environment will take precedence over the society in shaping this person's attitude.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'publics'' or 'public's'?
Suggestion: publics'; public's
...ken as a holistic representation of the publics mindset. The author suggests that the p...
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Line 9, column 283, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an impulsive manner" with adverb for "impulsive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...case when the individual chooses to act in an impulsive manner, then the immediate surroundings and si...
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Line 9, column 564, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...edence over the society in shaping this persons attitude.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, then, while, as to, for instance, in general, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2466.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 484.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09504132231 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00013090806 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487603305785 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 805.5 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.650179617 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8888888889 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313767615199 0.243740707755 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885401914671 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119606388559 0.0758088955206 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165032009537 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105106648642 0.0667264976115 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 14.1392134831 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 48.8420337079 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.