People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Decisions play n important role in a persons life as they shape us and our future.It is what we decide today that leads us to a particular way of life in future. Decisions are very crucial and we need to make them at almost every point of our life. We need to make various kinds of decisions in everyday life such as a housewife has to decide what groceries are needed for the month, a business man should make various decisions about the management of the company , a student should take decisions regarding the number of hours they should study ,etc. Sometimes the small decisions to be made are not very important and any mistake made in them is generally accepted.But in case of bigger decisions ,we need to be more careful and should ensure that they are properly addressed before coming to any conclusions. Hence I agree with the author that people who take important decisions based on emotions and later provide a logical explanation to it are bad decision makers.
A persons state of mind keeps changing depending their surroundings. An emotion of irritation would take over a person who has waited for quite a lot of time in traffic to reach a certain destination. A employee would be in a bad state of mood if his or her boss criticize them. If a person makes sudden decisions at such point of time ,it would likely reflect their current mood and not a logical reason. A good example of this would be the BJP party in India , the cheif minister of the party had taken a sudden and harsh decision to give up the most merely because of some bad commentary given by the opposition party regarding his lack of authenticity in winning he votes. Which was clearly a wrong decision on his part to get easily offended by what other people say and take such severe steps and action.
Various students end up applying for higher studies because society makes them think its a pride possession. But they do not make a proper plan regarding the good and bad . The cost they would spend on applying to colleges when they do not get scholorships. Neither do they think of what might happen if they do not land up with a job in foreign lands. Instead they merely get carried away by their emotional happiness and pride feeling and end up applying. And they later give various logical reasons on how they have made a right choice
Hence I would like to conclude that although sometimes it may turn out that these decisions taken on impulse might be right and may be very prolific to a person , generally that is not the case and its wise to think clearly and jot down the advantages and disadvantages of taking up some decision and then put into effect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, regarding, so, then, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2176.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 478.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55230125523 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48416066658 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493723849372 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 699.3 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.511675191 60.3974514979 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1176470588 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.29411764706 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290718083949 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097438937076 0.0831039109588 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111758207009 0.0758088955206 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164255653648 0.150359130593 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1110265046 0.0667264976115 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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