People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
The contention between the decision taken emotionally and logically is not a trivial one because both emotion and logic are our separable companion of life. Though being emotional is a very natural character of human being, making decision being the victim of emotional state often mislead us and may cause in irrevocable harm . For this i mostly agree with the prompt saying that people who make decision relying on emotion and justify later with logic are poor decision makers for two reasons.
To begin, emotion based decision often make people the victim of inestimable harmful consequences, and afterward justification can not recover that loss at all. For instance, in 1971 after liberation war of Bangladesh, late President Bangabondhu Sheikh Mujibur Rahman exculpated many war criminals and forgave them though their heinous act at the war field. It was completely emotion based decision and it;s consequences were unbearable and there was no place for logical justification for that decision. In 1975 those criminal killed brutally Mujib with his whole family. Though Sheikh Mujibur Rahman was great leader, in that particular situation he was a poor decision maker. Eventually he and whole nation had to pay for that.
Secondly, in this cruel world and in pragmatic life everything occurs in one way. If one deed is done it is done forever. There is little room for to reverse the previous action in right way. The same thing goes for decision making. For instance one may intend to stay at home in rural area due to his or her emotion because he or she can not stay without family member. Then his or her decision will not be beneficial for future aim and life endeavor because his working place might be at urban area and also time and tide wait for none. Life will provide opportunity for limited time for specific aim, profession and carrier. If he or seats idle and justify his or her aim logically it will not bring any light rather will make him or her depressed at later time.
Finally, there is a proverb, as you sow ,so you reap. Decision taken weather relying on emotion or logic , one must endure it's consequences. The consequences will depend on the decision's fairness. Sometimes people can not avoid emotion and it's not confirmed that decision taken based on emotion will be always backfiring. What bad is , later justification cause it's mostly fruitless
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 327, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ead us and may cause in irrevocable harm . For this i mostly agree with the prompt...
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Line 2, column 463, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re unbearable and there was no place for logical justification for that decision....
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Line 4, column 83, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...atic life everything occurs in one way. If one deed is done it is done forever. Th...
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Line 6, column 40, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... Finally, there is a proverb, as you sow ,so you reap. Decision taken weather rely...
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Line 6, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...aken weather relying on emotion or logic , one must endure its consequences. The ...
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Line 6, column 116, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r relying on emotion or logic , one must endure its consequences. The consequence...
^^
Line 6, column 179, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'decisions'' or 'decision's'?
Suggestion: decisions'; decision's
...es. The consequences will depend on the decisions fairness. Sometimes people can not avoi...
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Line 6, column 297, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'will' and 'be'.
Suggestion: will always be
...ed that decision taken based on emotion will be always backfiring. What bad is , later justifi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 335, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n will be always backfiring. What bad is , later justification cause its mostly fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 401.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94264339152 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58628189375 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546134663342 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.87824306 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0909090909 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2272727273 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396452518999 0.243740707755 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115907613617 0.0831039109588 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12690766181 0.0758088955206 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274263250585 0.150359130593 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142125266541 0.0667264976115 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 327, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ead us and may cause in irrevocable harm . For this i mostly agree with the prompt...
^^
Line 2, column 463, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re unbearable and there was no place for logical justification for that decision....
^^
Line 4, column 83, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...atic life everything occurs in one way. If one deed is done it is done forever. Th...
^^
Line 6, column 40, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... Finally, there is a proverb, as you sow ,so you reap. Decision taken weather rely...
^^
Line 6, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...aken weather relying on emotion or logic , one must endure its consequences. The ...
^^
Line 6, column 116, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r relying on emotion or logic , one must endure its consequences. The consequence...
^^
Line 6, column 179, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'decisions'' or 'decision's'?
Suggestion: decisions'; decision's
...es. The consequences will depend on the decisions fairness. Sometimes people can not avoi...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 297, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'will' and 'be'.
Suggestion: will always be
...ed that decision taken based on emotion will be always backfiring. What bad is , later justifi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 335, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n will be always backfiring. What bad is , later justification cause its mostly fr...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 401.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94264339152 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58628189375 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546134663342 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.87824306 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0909090909 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2272727273 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396452518999 0.243740707755 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115907613617 0.0831039109588 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12690766181 0.0758088955206 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274263250585 0.150359130593 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142125266541 0.0667264976115 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.