People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Some emotional decision makers will take their decisions as per their emotional intelligence and later they try to make those decisions logical with certain explanations. I agree with the view that they are considered as poor decision makers and let me put forth some reasons why this so.
Decision making is one of the key skills of the human beings which they need to use in each and every activity of life starting from when to woke up and what to eat upto what career path we wants to choose.A person can be successful when he is a good decision maker.However, there are some people who are very vulnerable in mixing their emotions with their intellectual skill of decision making. In some cases, the consequences of these kind of decisions not only going to affect people who make adhoc decisions but also their family.For example, a man whose life is based on his paycheck might emotionally decided to resign his job when he is going through a bad phase in his office or when he is facing some kind of discrimination.If he has a dependent family members, then this might affect his family financially.
Secondly , today's world is rapidly changing and evolving every single minute.This kind of decisions often leads a person into a diminishing path of his or her life.They could hardly relate their habit with others around them which will eventually lead into loneliness and despression.This might greatly affect their health in a long run.For instance, who is very radical emotional person might have very few friends and they can't easily get with others which will become a serious social problem if we have more people like this in society.
In conclusion, this kind of decisions might favour the person sometimes like an adamant child decided to get something from its parents or a man who won his love emotionally.However, this state of behaviour is not going to be fruitful everytime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 323.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89783281734 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80777357352 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569659442724 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 23.0359550562 230% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.462091069 60.3974514979 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 263.666666667 118.986275619 222% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.8333333333 23.4991977007 229% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.3333333333 5.21951772744 370% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284289220131 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167715567473 0.0831039109588 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792578984552 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180609540317 0.150359130593 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101858295631 0.0667264976115 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.6 14.1392134831 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 48.8420337079 36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 12.1743820225 197% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.03 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 11.2143820225 207% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.