People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
All the decision should be made after thinking carefully and
slowly. No important decision should be taken on the spot
or in a hast. People who make decision based on the
emotion and feeling usually regret the decision in the
future. If the decision taken by them causes some problem
in the future, they try to justify the decision with logic
which is not right. These type of the people are poor
decison maker.
There are many ways to prove the claim that the people
who make decision based on the emotion are poor decision
makers. Lets say in a office two person got a bonus. They
both will be on seventh heaven on hearing the news.
Person A, rapidly spend the bonus on liabilities like a fancy
new sports car, watch or a new phone, instead of buying
assets. Whereas, person B took some time to think where
he should invest the money or how he should spend it. In
the longer run the person B would be more profitable as he
idn't took a rash decison compare to person A.
We could understand the point made by the author with a
help of another example. If there Is fight between two
person lets say between two friends or two business patner
or between two family members and if in the heat of
argument some decission are made than there is a high
probability that decision would be a wrong. During the
argument between two friends, if one says that they would
never talk with one another, than it because of the of this
rash decision a good friendship would break. If a argument
is between two business patner and they decides to spilt
the business than it would be loss of the overall business
as they both would become a competitor of each other and
both will face losses. If the argument is between the family
members ad they decided to never talk with each other
than this breaks up a family and it is very emotional on
other family member.
I am not saying that imediate decision should not be taken.
There are times in life where we need to take decision on
the spot like in hosipitals where doctors have to take
decision very fast including the family member. In sports
cpatian of a team, in share market to decide which stock to
sell. I am just saying that the decision should not be made
in emotion.
It is said that the decision should never be made when a
person is happy, sad, angry, excited beacuse the decision
that are made during this time are related to the present
feeling which a person is feeling. Usually when a person is
feeling these type of emotion his thinking power is affected
and the person Is not able to think propely. A person
should always keep their mind cool and make a decision
considering all the aspect. This makes them acumen in
their decision.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 9, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... the emotion are poor decision makers. Lets say in a office two person got a bonus....
^^^^
Line 12, column 21, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... are poor decision makers. Lets say in a office two person got a bonus. They bo...
^
Line 12, column 34, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
...ision makers. Lets say in a office two person got a bonus. They both will be on seve...
^^^^^^
Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
...example. If there Is fight between two person lets say between two friends or two bus...
^^^^^^
Line 29, column 49, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ision a good friendship would break. If a argument is between two business patne...
^
Line 30, column 41, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'decide'
Suggestion: decide
...is between two business patner and they decides to spilt the business than it would be...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2292.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 496.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62096774194 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16895007616 2.79657885939 78% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.421370967742 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 700.2 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3759546606 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 5.21951772744 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 47.0 4.97078651685 946% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33422167171 0.243740707755 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116853863649 0.0831039109588 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142469582369 0.0758088955206 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846431595702 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135783766135 0.0667264976115 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.38706741573 80% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 9, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... the emotion are poor decision makers. Lets say in a office two person got a bonus....
^^^^
Line 12, column 21, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... are poor decision makers. Lets say in a office two person got a bonus. They bo...
^
Line 12, column 34, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
...ision makers. Lets say in a office two person got a bonus. They both will be on seve...
^^^^^^
Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
...example. If there Is fight between two person lets say between two friends or two bus...
^^^^^^
Line 29, column 49, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ision a good friendship would break. If a argument is between two business patne...
^
Line 30, column 41, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'decide'
Suggestion: decide
...is between two business patner and they decides to spilt the business than it would be...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2292.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 496.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62096774194 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16895007616 2.79657885939 78% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.421370967742 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 700.2 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3759546606 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 5.21951772744 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 47.0 4.97078651685 946% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33422167171 0.243740707755 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116853863649 0.0831039109588 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142469582369 0.0758088955206 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846431595702 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135783766135 0.0667264976115 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.38706741573 80% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.