A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor.
According to the author, a person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contractand these persons should not retain any civil rights. To carried out the crimes knowingly is the great mistake. I agree with the claim of author to great some extent; a person should not retain any civil right or the right to benefit from his or her own labor if he or she kwowingly commits the crime. However, if the crime is small one or pardonable then a person should should excused oce through warning rather deprived him or her from retaining any civil rights.
Admittately, doing the crime knowingly is always great mistake, if the person carried thec crimes like girls traffikicking, tourturing the wife in the reason of the dowry,etc. are considered to be the aganist the social contract. The person carrying the activities like trafiking of girls from the society of own or of other society is considered to be inhumane activities. So, if the person knows this crime is unpardonable or against the social rulesand regulation and are still engaging in these type of crime should be punished and should be banished from the society.
Similarly, in the todays world dowry system is considered to be ruled out from our society. So, the activities carrying sych as punishing a women/wife in a reason of the not providing the demand property from girls side are considered to be crime. But still these kinds of activities are still present inour society, so, person carrying out these types of activities should be punished and should not retain any civilright in the society.
Howerver, by breaking the minor rule of the society, the person should not considered to be social contract broker. I our society, personwho drinks alcohol and make noise in the society and distrub other are alsoconsidered to be crime; but these typesof crime are generally pardonable in nature.The personshould be admonished for these kind of the activities before depriving him from the civil rights of the society.
So, in sum, i agree withthe speaker that person who commits the big crime like girls trafiking, women harrashment should be punished, however, the pardonable crime should be taken in consideration and should not deprived them from the civil rights.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 460, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: should
...s small one or pardonable then a person should should excused oce through warning rather depr...
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Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...ring the wife in the reason of the dowry,etc. are considered to be the aganist the s...
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Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
...e activities carrying sych as punishing a women/wife in a reason of the not providing t...
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Line 7, column 141, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...activities carrying sych as punishing a women/wife in a reason of the not providing t...
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Line 11, column 76, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'consider'
Suggestion: consider
...e of the society, the person should not considered to be social contract broker. I our soc...
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Line 11, column 296, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...rime are generally pardonable in nature.The personshould be admonished for these ki...
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Line 11, column 331, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...ture.The personshould be admonished for these kind of the activities before depriving him ...
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Line 15, column 13, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rights of the society. So, in sum, i agree withthe speaker that person who c...
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Line 15, column 213, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'deprive'
Suggestion: deprive
...e taken in consideration and should not deprived them from the civil rights.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, similarly, so, still, then, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 375.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02933333333 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6940593081 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426666666667 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.663645084 60.3974514979 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.714285714 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7857142857 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441541180398 0.243740707755 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176213804784 0.0831039109588 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139615707913 0.0758088955206 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26348286861 0.150359130593 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.186169254365 0.0667264976115 279% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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