A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor.
The crime rates has always been increasing over time in spite of the strictest actions and laws. With the advent of new technologies and inventions, the criminals find new ways to infringe into the system. The situation only depends on who is thinking one step ahead - the makers or the breakers? Once the flaw gets exposed or opportunity seems handy, any individual can get the notion of committing crime even if he is not a criminal by profession.
The issue here of depriving criminals of civil rights seems to be exaggerated. It wholly depends on the type of crime one commits. Even downloading illegal material online is a crime and most of the people are involved in it. If all these people are expunged from the society, there will be no society at first place! Also it has to be noted that even if the actions against criminals are made stricter it won't intimidate those who are already into this business since the laws are already too strict. By depraving the criminals of their civil rights may not make much difference in the present rates of crime.
Having said that, some serious issues like rape, murder, big scams etc do need to be looked upon more assiduously and such grave acts should be punished as harshly as possible to set an example for others. In this case it is right to take away the basic rights and they should not be allowed to earn from their labor. By initiating this course of action, the culprits would not be able to further pursue their life on unseemly course and would be allowed to live abstemiously by the law.
To recapitulate, there has to be some margin for which clemency can be rendered and above that, this strict course of action needs to be applied. The crimes should be accordingly distributed over the margin.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 319, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...here will be no society at first place! Also it has to be noted that even if the act...
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'as to', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.204747774481 0.240241500013 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.192878338279 0.157235817809 123% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0741839762611 0.0880659088768 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0682492581602 0.0497285424764 137% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0296735905045 0.0444667217837 67% => OK
Prepositions: 0.13056379822 0.12292977631 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0652818991098 0.0406280797675 161% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.47816254342 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0356083086053 0.030933414821 115% => OK
Particles: 0.00296735905045 0.0016655270985 178% => OK
Determiners: 0.109792284866 0.0997080785238 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.026706231454 0.0249443105267 107% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00890207715134 0.0148568991511 60% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1767.0 2732.02544248 65% => OK
No of words: 313.0 452.878318584 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64536741214 6.0361032391 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.58838876751 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.303514376997 0.366273622748 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.210862619808 0.280924506359 75% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.137380191693 0.200843997647 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0830670926518 0.132149295362 63% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47816254342 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 219.290929204 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594249201278 0.48968727796 121% => OK
Word variations: 66.273682191 55.4138127331 120% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6194690265 73% => OK
Sentence length: 20.8666666667 23.380412469 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3366152603 59.4972553346 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.8 141.124799967 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 23.380412469 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.674092028746 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 41.9529286475 51.4728631049 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.37755102041 1.64882698954 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326514572606 0.391690518653 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.124365199949 0.123202303941 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0672642207124 0.077325440228 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.574596830004 0.547984918172 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.103553063878 0.149214159877 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140129301545 0.161403998019 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525494075387 0.0892212321368 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.382759689604 0.385218514788 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.080742342692 0.0692045440612 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211156222508 0.275328986314 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590395327496 0.0653680567796 90% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.4325221239 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.30420353982 170% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 7.22455752212 14% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 8.0 3.66592920354 218% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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