Prompt 2: Lasting Legacy
Prompt
Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
Instructions
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Inspiring people are the ones who make others proud of what they do or achieve, who live by some sort of code of conduct or a vision they explore through their life or work. These strong ones who make their ideas stronger than critics or envy, are the ones who truly contribute to the world.
When a person is trying to invent something, it is not always easy. If someone is thinking about being disruptive, or on challenging a status quo or an idea, surely this person is facing difficulties, because hard things take longer to get. A discovery, or an idea that takes years, decades being lapidated, just a few can say they did it. If it was something easy, anybody could realize that. Let us consider Tesla consolidates a new kind of battery that autorecharges and has a duration of one hundred years. This is a Legacy difficult to achieve by, for example, inventing gathering three or four phrases and sing a new pop song that, after a month, nobody will remember because there will be another one, and another one, and it just go on.
People who decide to challenge what is already there to come up with something new, they have to be strong. A mental and emotional solid base that will make them survive through criticism, without making them change their ideas. Imagine if presidents changed their ideas with every critic that come up at them.
People who live for an idea or by a code, they believe in something. They possess a macro vision that ordinary people, imediatists, do not. Idealists, changers, disrupters, they think for the long haul, calling long shots to a profound change or creation that they know it is going to last.
Some people could say that, by stating that, legacy would not be something ordinary people - like you, or me - are able to achieve or leave behind. That is not true, everybody can have their legacy. But it might not be as inspiring and as transformational as those who truly live and work by their beliefs.
Conclusively, it is hard to build a legacy. It could be a massive one, that represents a longlasting idea or change, or it could be a family, a job kept over the years, a house built, it still would be a legacy. But this person will not be remembered as someone who lived to create, to disrupt, and to face all sorts of difficulties and critics to achieve his or her goal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, for example, kind of, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 419.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58233890215 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53302224011 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536992840095 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.77640449438 507% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4514661057 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.95 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167141987428 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491919307412 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468843679508 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924932946073 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542389206351 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.