Scandals -whether in politics,academia, or other areas-can be useful.they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could
Scandals brings into limelight the issues of the society that have been overlooked in the past.During the course of progression of the society, numerous avenues opens for advancement of the society.Also various flaws are created during this process. Socio-economic reformers or stalwarts may or may not speak about these.But this do not move the people until a scandal creates a riot.However pragmatic a society might be, unless confronted with the situation of a problem it doesn’t tend to pay attention to it.In 1970s Watergate scandal of US led to resignation of the then President Richard Nixon.The scandal was about breaking in into Watergate building of Washington DC and prowlers traced back to Nixon's re-election campaign.Though he claimed he had no prior knowledge of the espionage later he had to resign because he had been speaking for his party.The whole scandal led to change in the operations of the US government.A large section of the people are affected when a scandal is exposed.Common men do not have much to pay heed to social reformers or leaders.When a scandal comes up it becomes the common and primary challenge for a huge part of the society.Another scandal that popped into my head is the case of Satyam Computers. The people of the society didnot know about the fraudulent activities of the chairman of the company, Ramalinga Raju, until in 2009 who was caught for falsifying and manipulating the company's account by 1.47 billion dollars.He had to give resignation immediately.
Another imminent scandal was the food grain scam of Uttar Pradesh (2002-2010) where the distributors had sold of food grains worth of Rs.35,000 crore, for the below poverty line(BPL), in open markets.This scam effected a huge section of the Indian society.The government of India's attempt to remove poverty from the society was not a full-proof idea.The government had spent millions on giving away food grains to low income groups at subsidized prices. But no proper accounting and auditing was done in this process. That led to such a big scandal.This affected a huge section of the society especially the low income groups.They started questioning the government.However these issues were not in the form of a scam, issues like allocation of resources would not have been of much concern to the people.
Thus, scandals play a pivotal role in addressing certain significant issues of the society.It is the responsibility of the society to bring out the best out of these situations so that the society grows stronger.Scandals may be seen as a malaise but what is more important is the lesson it drives home.Scandals reveals weaknesses of the society, but at the same time the society must bear the onus of such weaknesses and strive towards extricating itself from the realms of such issues and emerge as a stronger entity.Only then can the civilization progress.
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- Scandals -whether in politics,academia, or other areas-can be useful.they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could 16
- Scandals -whether in politics,academia, or other areas-can be useful.they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could 16
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'what is more']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.289205702648 0.240241500013 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.158859470468 0.157235817809 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0835030549898 0.0880659088768 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0346232179226 0.0497285424764 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.020366598778 0.0444667217837 46% => OK
Prepositions: 0.13849287169 0.12292977631 113% => OK
Participles: 0.040733197556 0.0406280797675 100% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.10807007524 2.79330140395 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0285132382892 0.030933414821 92% => OK
Particles: 0.0061099796334 0.0016655270985 367% => OK
Determiners: 0.136456211813 0.0997080785238 137% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0142566191446 0.0249443105267 57% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0142566191446 0.0148568991511 96% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2884.0 2732.02544248 106% => OK
No of words: 470.0 452.878318584 104% => OK
Chars per words: 6.13617021277 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.385106382979 0.366273622748 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.302127659574 0.280924506359 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.206382978723 0.200843997647 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.159574468085 0.132149295362 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10807007524 2.79330140395 111% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 219.290929204 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542553191489 0.48968727796 111% => OK
Word variations: 64.9378993031 55.4138127331 117% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6194690265 34% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 67.1428571429 23.380412469 287% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 279.92892684 59.4972553346 470% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 412.0 141.124799967 292% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.1428571429 23.380412469 287% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.42857142857 0.674092028746 212% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.94800884956 61% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 5.21349557522 556% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 97.3556231003 51.4728631049 189% => OK
Elegance: 2.19047619048 1.64882698954 133% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.063929977337 0.391690518653 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.235526816718 0.123202303941 191% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.141428906273 0.077325440228 183% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.745772655262 0.547984918172 136% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.251066598483 0.149214159877 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481287916236 0.161403998019 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0234141087545 0.0892212321368 26% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.577229578857 0.385218514788 150% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0756866812153 0.0692045440612 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0526236554133 0.275328986314 19% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00764838085252 0.0653680567796 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.4325221239 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 7.22455752212 14% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 13.5995575221 44% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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