Scandals -whether in politics,academia, or other areas-can be useful.they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could
Everything around us has been corrupted in one way or the other.Books,food,crops,education,etc.- everything has a little pinch of corruption added to it.Everything seems to be fine at first glance,but when we look at for few other times we notice the flaws it contains.These things cannot be understood by listening to what reformers or leaders say.We become aware of it only when scandals are exposed to the society.
Scandals have been imminent in society from times immemorial.Scandals are illegitimate,unethical behaviour or events that is unacceptable to the people of the society.These generally highlights certain issues that effect a larger section of the society. As the picture above states "we see,but we do not observe".This is universally accepted phenomenon.Whenever a society advances forwards, it overlooks a lot of issues.Scandals, not only helps in bringing out the weaknesses of the society but also brings out the issues that have been overlooked in the course of civilization.I am in complete agreement with today's topic.
Scandals brings into limelight the issues of the society that have been overlooked in the past.During the course of progression of the society, numerous avenues opens for advancement of the society.Also various flaws are created during this process. Socio-economic reformers or stalwarts may or may not speak about these.But this do not move the people until a scandal creates a riot.However pragmatic a society might be, unless confronted with the situation of a problem it doesn’t tend to pay attention to it.In 1970s Watergate scandal of US led to resignation of the then President Richard Nixon.The scandal was about breaking in into Watergate building of Washington DC and prowlers traced back to Nixon's re-election campaign.Though he claimed he had no prior knowledge of the espionage later he had to resign because he had been speaking for his party.The whole scandal led to change in the operations of the US government.A large section of the people are affected when a scandal is exposed.Common men do not have much to pay heed to social reformers or leaders.When a scandal comes up it becomes the common and primary challenge for a huge part of the society.Another scandal that popped into my head is the case of Satyam Computers. The people of the society didnot know about the fraudulent activities of the chairman of the company, Ramalinga Raju, until in 2009 who was caught for falsifying and manipulating the company's account by 1.47 billion dollars.He had to give resignation immediately.
Another imminent scandal was the food grain scam of Uttar Pradesh (2002-2010) where the distributors had sold of food grains worth of Rs.35,000 crore, for the below poverty line(BPL), in open markets.This scam effected a huge section of the Indian society.The government of India's attempt to remove poverty from the society was not a full-proof idea.The government had spent millions on giving away food grains to low income groups at subsidized prices. But no proper accounting and auditing was done in this process. That led to such a big scandal.This affected a huge section of the society especially the low income groups.They started questioning the government.However these issues were not in the form of a scam, issues like allocation of resources would not have been of much concern to the people.
Thus, scandals play a pivotal role in addressing certain significant issues of the society.It is the responsibility of the society to bring out the best out of these situations so that the society grows stronger.Scandals may be seen as a malaise but what is more important is the lesson it drives home.Scandals reveals weaknesses of the society, but at the same time the society must bear the onus of such weaknesses and strive towards extricating itself from the realms of such issues and emerge as a stronger entity.Only then can the civilization progress.
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- Scandals -whether in politics,academia, or other areas-can be useful.they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could 16
- Scandals -whether in politics,academia, or other areas-can be useful.they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could 16
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'what is more']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
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Verbs: 0.171385991058 0.157235817809 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0849478390462 0.0880659088768 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0372578241431 0.0497285424764 75% => OK
Pronouns: 0.026825633383 0.0444667217837 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.134128166915 0.12292977631 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0491803278689 0.0406280797675 121% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.52324319773 2.79330140395 126% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0283159463487 0.030933414821 92% => OK
Particles: 0.00745156482861 0.0016655270985 447% => OK
Determiners: 0.122205663189 0.0997080785238 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0119225037258 0.0249443105267 48% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0193740685544 0.0148568991511 130% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3928.0 2732.02544248 144% => OK
No of words: 630.0 452.878318584 139% => OK
Chars per words: 6.23492063492 6.0361032391 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.00997013923 4.58838876751 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.388888888889 0.366273622748 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.298412698413 0.280924506359 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.212698412698 0.200843997647 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.163492063492 0.132149295362 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.52324319773 2.79330140395 126% => OK
Unique words: 321.0 219.290929204 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509523809524 0.48968727796 104% => OK
Word variations: 64.7868334024 55.4138127331 117% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6194690265 48% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 63.0 23.380412469 269% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 238.629105517 59.4972553346 401% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 392.8 141.124799967 278% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.0 23.380412469 269% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.1 0.674092028746 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 45.0 5.21349557522 863% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 92.8412698413 51.4728631049 180% => OK
Elegance: 1.93670886076 1.64882698954 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0860092648008 0.391690518653 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.224151015093 0.123202303941 182% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.110613536821 0.077325440228 143% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.784830081175 0.547984918172 143% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.225277092403 0.149214159877 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633073667261 0.161403998019 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314479733803 0.0892212321368 35% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.50236764532 0.385218514788 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.137160507594 0.0692045440612 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074081858053 0.275328986314 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270019710736 0.0653680567796 41% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.4325221239 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.30420353982 151% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 7.22455752212 28% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 7.0 3.66592920354 191% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 13.5995575221 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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