Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
As stated by some great person, "With great power comes great responsibility". With advancing technology and developing science, we are day-by-day advancing into a more modern and easier world. But one should rather pause for a moment and take a deeper look into the question: "Are science and technology solving our social problems?". Let us dig deeper into the question.
Technology and science on the perspective of society are helping us spread the good message, explore ideas, spread it into society. But again technology and science may sometimes lead to other problems. For instance, Nuclear Weapons with some advanced countries capable of destroying cities, even countries are more or less the result of this science and technology only. One might say better weapons and protection are helping us secure our society, but we need to mention the fear such weapons have created in the outer world and other societies. In some sense, fear rising in our societies which is a considerable problem. Not only this but in a race to have better technology and advanced sciences, countries have started racing against time trying to get more power over other nations. This has always led to acrimony and martial situations. First, technology led to heavy machines and advanced weapons, and now, with advancing science, even viruses and man-made diseases are being made for purposes. Such things are putting societies at threat. Nevertheless, problems not only include the safety and well being of a person, but also we need to make sure we keep the society's identity conserved. With newer technology, wrong influencers, immoral leaders, misanthropes, terrorism, etc may find an easier way to probe into societal members. This will ultimately lead to the destruction of culture. Again wealthier people and people with greater power will have more grip over these scientific powers which not always, but sometimes will be misused for personal purposes actually which might disturb the life of others leading to an imbalance in the society itself. Looking on the bright side, science and technology have helped us express our thoughts to others in a lucid manner. For example, human science helped us realize that everyone should have certain rights and people do have the authority to fight for it. Technology helped us send messages to the other end of the world in just a matter of seconds. In some sense integrity of society depends on sharing and understanding perspectives of everyone which advancing technology has made simpler.
In conclusion, technology and science are parts necessary for the development of a society. But we, the members of the society, have a bigger role to play on deciding on how to use it. It is in our hands to use science and technology positively to solve the problems and not to misuse it
- Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society s problems Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your pos 50
- Discussing controversial topics with those with contrasting views is not useful because very few people change their mind when questioned about their core beliefs Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree Be 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1526, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[7]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put between 'will' and 'be'.
Suggestion: will sometimes be
...scientific powers which not always, but sometimes will be misused for personal purposes actually ...
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Line 2, column 1766, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a lucid manner" with adverb for "lucid"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...elped us express our thoughts to others in a lucid manner. For example, human science helped us r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2378.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 463.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13606911447 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80137332931 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505399568035 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 751.5 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.9795540443 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0833333333 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2916666667 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176779391648 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537734513261 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042344256422 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120166062321 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228782518074 0.0667264976115 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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