Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
In any field, be it arts, music, politics, journalism , science or sports, talent is a essential element the field to sustain and have popularity. The prompt says that the young children's talent should be acknowledged and nurtured so that they have sustainable development going ahead in future.I agree with the prompt for the following two reasons.
Firstly, providing the right facilities, at young age, to bolster the talent, young kids possess is of vital importance. Kids have high level of adaptability when they are small, using these attributes to hone the skills they possess is easier, than done later. Sachin Tendulkar, one of the renowned cricketer, started his career at much early stage in international cricket. Had the skills of Sachin were not identified in his childhood, he would not have raised in his cricket career to a level where he is now. Stunning number of centuries, a good bowler and a great fielder, should not have risen if Bombay cricket academy would not have facilitated his journey. Therefore it's vital to have the foundation set for a kids who possess talent in their early age.
Secondly, the early a person starts his professional career, relevant to his or her talent, the better as he or she will have a long professional tenure. The precocious teen ager Anil Ambani, stepped into the professional world at an age of 17, where he was made to head a telecom industry. Much to his skill he possessed, he was able to achieve greater heights and lead the industry to huge success being in the profession for almost 70 years.
However, children will be over burdened in an event to make them competitive and will have to sacrifice their leisure. But, it's a momentarily loss to have bigger gains. Iron is shaped when it's hot, so are the kids at their young age, if will done, will lead to flying colours.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... be it arts, music, politics, journalism , science or sports, talent is a essentia...
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Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...urnalism , science or sports, talent is a essential element the field to sustain...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or sports, talent is a essential element the field to sustain and have popularity...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ave sustainable development going ahead in future.I agree with the prompt for the followi...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...nable development going ahead in future.I agree with the prompt for the following...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...would not have facilitated his journey. Therefore its vital to have the foundation set f...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ore its vital to have the foundation set for a kids who possess talent in their e...
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Line 4, column 720, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a kid' or simply 'kids'?
Suggestion: a kid; kids
...s vital to have the foundation set for a kids who possess talent in their early age. ...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...l have to sacrifice their leisure. But, its a momentarily loss to have bigger gains...
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Line 9, column 129, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('momentarily') instead an adjective, or a noun ('loss') instead of another adjective.
...ve to sacrifice their leisure. But, its a momentarily loss to have bigger gains. Iron is shaped wh...
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Line 9, column 243, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'do' or 'be done'?
Suggestion: do; be done
...re the kids at their young age, if will done, will lead to flying colours.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 317.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84542586751 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64557189856 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577287066246 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7118643198 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.714285714 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20733213301 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745847698307 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540283581668 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121277096496 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328980003777 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.