Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take
The world has now over than billions of species, most of which we do not even know the names of. This huge variations are important as each one resides in an ecosystem with an integral part in it. The loss of any species will cause its relevant ecosystem to lose balance which might have a domino effect over other ecosystems too. Most of the species are a result of the environments they live in. Like in Australia, Kangaroos are found which cannot be found in any other part of the world. Pandas live in China, Royal Bengal Tigers in south east Asia. Such diversity is a result of different environments in different parts of the world. Like China is a major producer of bamboo which is the primary food for pandas. If any change is brought upon those environment, it will have a direct effect on the species that rely on the environment.
In an ideal world, all of these species would have lived side by side in harmony. But this is not the case. Some of the species are on the verge of extinction nowadays. If we look into it, we can list down primarily two reasons behind this. Human intervention and climatic change. Humans for their own personal agenda are destroying forests, polluting the environment to an extent that other species are finding it hard to live. For example, constant deforestation of the Sundarbans for the installation of a nuclear plant is forcing its habitant, the royal bengal tigers to leave the forest and enter into the surrouding villages for loss of habitat. This is leading to a clash of survival between villagers and tigers, ultimately humans use weapons to kill those tigers. Eventually the numbers of tigers have dropped over 50% in the last decade. Climate change is also having severe effects on biodiversity. The sea level is rising and the sea water is becoming extremely salty which makes it impossible for most of the fishes to survive. The extreme hot weather is melting the ice which is causing the extinction of the species who live in such area.
If the endangered species become extinct, it will make so many ecosystems to lose balance overall and have a severe effect on the environment and us too. Society should make efforts not only to save those species who are endangered due to our activities but those too who are struggling to survive in this changing world. All species have a role in the environment, and their survival is important to ensure diversity in future too. If we limit our activities in a way that it does not harm the survival of other species, it won't have much effect. For example, climate change might not seem like a cause by human activities but it is in the long run. The daily activities of humans are making harmful effect on climate which is sequentially causing mane species to become extinct. We cannot draw a boundary between human causes and other causes as both are interlinked.
Society should make sustainable plans to limit activities that are harmful for the survival of other species and preserve the biodiversity by taking extra measures. If we can save the endangered species from becoming extinct, we can save ourselves by giving us the chance to live in a more balanced environment.
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- Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take 50
- Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take 50
- Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 751, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this environment' or 'those environments'?
Suggestion: this environment; those environments
... pandas. If any change is brought upon those environment, it will have a direct effect on the sp...
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Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...e in harmony. But this is not the case. Some of the species are on the verge of extinction ...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o live in a more balanced environment.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2637.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 556.0 442.535393258 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7428057554 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85588840946 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59340980496 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458633093525 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 859.5 704.065955056 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6319989111 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 5.21951772744 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.83258426966 310% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251810798378 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671912725339 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623530988577 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175802415375 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542112326084 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.