Some people argue that successful leaders in government, industry, or other fields must be highly competitive. Other people claim that in order to be successful, a leader must be willing and able to cooperate with others.
Author makes a point by stating that young people should be prepared for leadership roles in different sectors with understanding of co-operation, not competition. Author tacitly shows that system should not be competition driven. I agree with the author's point of view that cooperativeness will bring more change to the system.
Leadership requires quality such as leading from the front and working with people, understanding their problem and managing it efficiently. For, those skills Leader should be open to all the ideas and theory. He/She should be capable enough to bind a team together. When everybody is working with the same idea and that is to improve everyone around them, it will always going to be a positve outcome.
Moreover, competition based culture is stymie to individuals growth as they will always be looking to perform better than their opponent or colleagues and in that process, will forgot to compete with themselves for their own growth. Inorder to prove their superiority people will try to disparage others and their contribution. We have seen multiple examples in past where people have tried to betray their own people in order to remove their competition which could lead to disasters for their own company or motherland.
Though, i will not deny that competition somewhere helps individual to reach their goals and try to outperform their opponent but considering the positive sides, Authors point seems valid and reasonable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...ve everyone around them, it will always going to be a positve outcome. Moreover, c...
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Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'forget'
Suggestion: forget
...or colleagues and in that process, will forgot to compete with themselves for their ow...
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Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...r own company or motherland. Though, i will not deny that competition somewher...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 234.0 442.535393258 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28205128205 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78851311476 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606837606838 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 704.065955056 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.753966627 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.363636364 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221327317294 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899050007293 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370611267129 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12047181012 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516154603048 0.0667264976115 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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