Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Art has, for thousands of years, allowed humans to express their ideas, thoughts as well as their creativity. It is a means of expression. The alphabets being used across the world are nothing but art which has been refined into a small set of symbols over the years. Apart from these, pictorial and graphical art have also been practiced as a means of articulation or even for story telling and various other forms of entertainment.
So, as is apparent, I believe that art has been quite an integral part of the very existence of humanity. Any form of expression is meant to convey a message, express one’s thoughts , feelings and emotions and art is just a form of expression. Thus preserving art, I feel, is quite an important task to do as it is a montage of the entire journey how we humans grew and perceived all that there was to explore throughout their existence. Preserving such art forms provides us with an an opportunity to relive those moments vicariously. It further allows us to learn a lot about the past and how we evolved through the years, how our ways of thinking changed and much more.
Preserving such arts not only helps historians to study the evolution of mankind but also serves as an inspiration to a lot many artful people who take pleasure in observing the aesthetic value of such arts. Then there is another lot of people who not only enjoy looking at them and drawing out the intricacies, but actually practice such art themselves using the preserved art as a source of inspiration. They learn how to experiment with different forms of art often blending one with another and even adding their own unique style to it. We even hear about such dexterous artists showcasing their originals at various exhibitions and even selling them at breathtaking prices. Thus the act of preservation actually encourages and inspires people to practice various forms of art themselves which keeps it alive as a means of expression.
A contrary belief is that expenditure such as this, is not contributing to the development of our country and is considered wasteful. I feel that our world should not just be all about developments in economy or technology. We are much more than that. We are humans and not machines born to fulfil the purpose of helping our country develop and then cease to exist. We have emotions, opinions and judgements and it is perfectly fine to express them in whichever form we wish. This interaction and the pleasure we get out of exchanging our thoughts is what makes us human. Therefore, if any form of aid is required to not only remind us of our humanity and what we are capable of but also encourage us to carry it forward, so be it.
Thus, inspite of not contributing to the country’s development, art is worth preserving for it reminds us how we have evolved, how far we have come and take pride in ourselves further encouraging us to keep this means of expression alive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, look, so, then, therefore, thus, well, apart from, as to, i feel, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 58.0 33.0505617978 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2441.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 512.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.767578125 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75682846001 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79604064474 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4921875 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 762.3 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9156854495 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.954545455 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163657829166 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052952046497 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051273178012 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957305914432 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545411167946 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 100.480337079 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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