some people believe that increasing violence in the media is the cause of increasing violence in our society, especially among children. Others believe that the children's peer groups and parental role models are a much more powerful influence on children's behavior
Our personality and beliefs are shaped by a myriad of factors that we are exposed to and experiences that we have. So, saying that only the increasing violence in media is responsible for increase in violence especially among children would be an oversimplification. Media is like a mirror to the society and the world. Its prime purpose is to report the happenings around the world and also to allow the discussion regarding these happenings. If the violence around is going up, can we really blame the media for also showing more violent content? It cannot be denied that, one might get influenced by what we see in the media, especially the impressionable children. But that is not enough to treat the violence shown in the media as the prime cause of increasigly violent behaviour amongst children. However, the media must strongly condemn the violence that they show and display discretionary messages to allow the adults to restrain their kids from watching very violent content and get impacted by it. Yes, media does influence us and the children, but even when a robust media was not present, was violence not going up?
The answer to this will be no and hence my view more closely aligns with the belief that peer gourps and parental role models are a much powerful influence on the children's behaviour. Children are like sponges that absorb what they see around them and mimick that behaviour. They cannot exercise as much judgement as an adult can. So, parental role models with who the children spend the maximum time in their formative years have a great impact on their behaviour and beliefs. One can curb the media content consumed by a child but how can they be protected from violent or passive agressive parents? So, if I child see his or her parents shouting, using physical violence or other violent behaviour, subconsciosly since a tender age, the child also takes in this behaviour and starts to display it. And owing to the fast paced lives, increasing economical inequalities, fluctuating market scenarios etc overall levels of frustation and anger among us are higher and this manifesting itself in the form of increasing violent behaviour. This in turn, is increasing the violence amongst children too.
Even peer groups like children have a direct impact on the children's behaviour. Aftet their parents, a child spends the maximum time with his or her peers in school etc. Peer pressure is widely acknowledged as a potent influence on children and teenagers. Even the games popular among children these days have very violent content taht is glorified and exposure to this can be attributed to the surge in violent behaviour by children.
Children naturally tend to trust and get influenced by the direct exposure to violent behaviour by their parents and peer group more than the indirect influnces such as media.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'really', 'regarding', 'so', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.23166023166 0.240241500013 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.167953667954 0.157235817809 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0733590733591 0.0880659088768 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0656370656371 0.0497285424764 132% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0540540540541 0.0444667217837 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.104247104247 0.12292977631 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0521235521236 0.0406280797675 128% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68351021916 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.027027027027 0.030933414821 87% => OK
Particles: 0.00579150579151 0.0016655270985 348% => OK
Determiners: 0.106177606178 0.0997080785238 106% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0212355212355 0.0249443105267 85% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.011583011583 0.0148568991511 78% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2854.0 2732.02544248 104% => OK
No of words: 477.0 452.878318584 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.98322851153 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.58838876751 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.352201257862 0.366273622748 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.264150943396 0.280924506359 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.197064989518 0.200843997647 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117400419287 0.132149295362 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68351021916 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 219.290929204 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480083857442 0.48968727796 98% => OK
Word variations: 54.8637496592 55.4138127331 99% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6194690265 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.6818181818 23.380412469 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9974379509 59.4972553346 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.727272727 141.124799967 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6818181818 23.380412469 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.409090909091 0.674092028746 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 48.0969125214 51.4728631049 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.34899328859 1.64882698954 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.511860808626 0.391690518653 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.108448944992 0.123202303941 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0783460475959 0.077325440228 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.498369920107 0.547984918172 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.168225523988 0.149214159877 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202648558654 0.161403998019 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950418683933 0.0892212321368 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.468994329171 0.385218514788 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0760021000968 0.0692045440612 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.341173868608 0.275328986314 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110501860448 0.0653680567796 169% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.30420353982 226% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 10.0 3.66592920354 273% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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