Some people believe that success in creative fields, such as painting, fiction writing, and
filmmaking, primarily requires hard work and perseverance. Others believe that such
success mainly requires innate talents that cannot be learned.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own
position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and
supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Can people proper in creative field by hard work and perserverance or innate talent is a compulsury requirement for shining in this field? I concede that no one can exalt without being arduous, however, the field where uniqueness is a basic characteristic, being only hardworking and persevered may not pay off. In creative field, passion and inherited talents are must which can not be accomplished through labor, hence, properity may not be achieved without merit.
Consider a situation where Newton, a scientist who invented the theory of gravity, is working hard to write a fairytale where a princess can fly with her dress, or a person with harsh and melodyless tone is tring his best to sing. In both cases, the probability of success for Newton or the melodyless singer is almost zero. Every person born with his or her own unique ability in this world, but no one can posses every ability that is possible in earth. So, no matter how people try and put affort, no one can achieve the goal of shining in a field in which they do not have innate talent.
Furthermore, nobody can preclude one person's passion from him or her. If society thinks and imposes the thought that people can achieve anything in creative field if they are laborous, than the whole afford of a person will be in vein if he put his afford in a wrong passion. Someday that person will realise that he is doing something which he does not even like, and will try to return to his own passion. As a result, all the efforts he has given to wrong field,will be gone in wrong way.
However, I do not demur in the fact that hard work or perseverance is not necessary if a person posseses talent. Labor is always needed to nourish and flourish a particular talent. If one person do not put enough effort, he might end up losing his own talent.
In sum, in creative field, hard work is a key to success. But the hard work will be gone in vein by the person who do not posses talent in the particular field in which he is putting ef
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 482, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...ible in earth. So, no matter how people try and put affort, no one can achieve the goal...
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Line 9, column 186, Rule ID: COMMA_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...in creative field if they are laborous, than the whole afford of a person will be in...
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Line 9, column 228, Rule ID: IN_VEIN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in vain' (=unsuccessfully)?
Suggestion: in vain
...an the whole afford of a person will be in vein if he put his afford in a wrong passion...
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Line 9, column 465, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , will
... the efforts he has given to wrong field,will be gone in wrong way. However, I d...
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Line 17, column 90, Rule ID: IN_VEIN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in vain' (=unsuccessfully)?
Suggestion: in vain
...success. But the hard work will be gone in vein by the person who do not posses talent ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53698630137 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49764159729 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482191780822 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1381069814 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8125 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136125950987 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586626792717 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562547896667 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939205735764 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496472244333 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.