Sports stars and movie stars have an obligation to behave as role models for the young people who look up to them. In return for the millions of dollars that they are paid, we should expect them to fulfill this societal responsibility.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Being famaous is a sweet curse. With the fame and recognition that comes with being a public figure, comes the responsibility to keep inspiring people who look up to you. The prompt suggests that sports and movie stars have an 'obligation' to behave as role models for the young people who look up to them and that it is okay to expect them to fulfill this compulsion of a responsibility in return for the copious amounts of money they earn. I mostly disagree with the ideology for two main reasons.
To begin, regardless of the amount of money anyone earns, noone earns it for free without putting in efforts. Sports and movie stars alike, put in a lot of hard work and difficult hours to produce performances that they do and the money they earn is hence a fruit of their work that they fully deserve. For instance, let us say the judge of a supreme court is criticized for earning he amount of money that judges generally do, all for just sitting around and passing judgements without having to do a lot of work. If he is hence expected to do other social activities as an 'obligation', even though the social activity being positive in nature, is not fair to be forced upon the judge as he, in some way has worked hard enough for his money and does not need to justify it by any other means. So similarly, it would be unfair to expect as an obligation from the stars that earn millions of dollars to bare the societal responsibility of always behaving as role models for people only to justify their salaries.
Furter, even though famous and successful, these stars are still just nrmal human beings in their personal space and time. As a result, they are bound to make mistakes from time to time and are hence often criticized based on the fact that many young people look up to them. For instance, a movie star enjoying a series of successful box office hits is still a human and might make mistakes like getting himself/herself involved in a drug addiction. Even though a terrible thing to be involved in, it is still a mistake that they themselves might also regret. An unfamous person would not have to face the plethora of judgements and media trials from across the world but it is considered okay for these stars just because they are looked up to. Therefore, it is morally wrong and a violation of their personal space to expect them to always be in the best of their behaviors.
While I agree that having a role model behave in a negative manner quite frequently can have disastrous impact on a society, it still does not fully justify expecting from these stars to bare the responsibility in return for the money they earn.
To conclude, it is not an easy question to answer as both sides of the coin have significant weight but I would still take side with preserving the fundamental rights of these stars. No amount of money should make any sports or movie star 'obliged' to behave in a certain, unnatural way that they do not want to.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 386, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'amounts'.
Suggestion: amounts
...reme court is criticized for earning he amount of money that judges generally do, all ...
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Line 4, column 47, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative manner" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...I agree that having a role model behave in a negative manner quite frequently can have disastrous im...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, similarly, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 33.0505617978 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2417.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 534.0 442.535393258 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52621722846 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80712388197 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4879607432 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462546816479 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 768.6 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.444845311 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.277777778 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 23.4991977007 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.434719328325 0.243740707755 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134391296782 0.0831039109588 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147348157576 0.0758088955206 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254691050332 0.150359130593 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115483654092 0.0667264976115 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 48.8420337079 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 12.1743820225 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.59 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.