Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
In today's world we can see people are fully dependent on technology without the help of technology we can not imagine our lives.I can not agree with the statement that technology makes are lives more complicated.there are many reason why I holding this opinion.
First, we are living in 21st century there are many innovations which solves are lives.without this technology we can not even start our day. even in history we known human are more tend toward research,people always come-up with easy solutions with they past experience and technologies are one of them. For instance , in history people required time traveler but today the scenario is completely different people's traveling time is reduced because of there are many options available like car, bus, train etc. this is nothing but the technology and it helps us to reduce our efforts.so we can apparently say that technology makes are our lives more easy.
Secondly,today people can not imagine their lives without these technology.With the help of technology people get connected with families and friends very easily even if they are living far away from their loved once they can communicate. so how we can say this technology made our lives more complicated. For instance , a person who is living country side and he want to expand his business so he can use technology like create his own website and can add his products and some business information on that website so people who lives in town and even in other countries they can also buy or approach him, so that person can get easy way to expand his business without even travelling city to city just he can launch his website.In this way technology helps us on daily basis.
Finally technology always tried to reduce our lives with using several different ways and without technology people can not live.there are many scientists who invented these technology and still this process is going on and I am sure within few years we can see more development in this technology.For instance , a car company are more in search of auto driven car to reduce human effort and Tesla is a company who already launched auto driven cars in market. even car companies are shifting fuel cars to battery operated cars. these are few examples who technology is moving fats and people are also accepting it.
To sum up, we can conclude that technology always help people to reduce their work effort and come-up with sagacious way.In my opinion technology never complicated our lives.
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also, apparently, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 33.0505617978 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2080.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 420.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95238095238 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70751125061 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483333333333 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 23.0359550562 152% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.116187395 60.3974514979 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.333333333 118.986275619 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 23.4991977007 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 5.21951772744 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168586566696 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928245121491 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905568242538 0.0758088955206 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119785064599 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412933589987 0.0667264976115 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 14.1392134831 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 48.8420337079 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 12.1743820225 139% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 11.2143820225 143% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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