Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated
It has been rightly said that great actions are the result of great thoughts. In the past few decades, the world has immensely improved in the technologies aspect. our future might witness further amazing discoveries. the sole purpose of working on the technology and discovering new things was to make our life easier. it has no doubt made our lives efficient relaxing and comfortable in a certain way. right from the time, we wake up thanks to an alarm clock which again has extraordinary technology within itself to the most strenuous tasks that we are supposed to complete in our offices, we always depend on the various technologies that we have at our disposal.
with all due credit to the technologies in the current world, I would say that we, humans have forgotten to maintain the balance between our real life and our virtual life. 90% of the teenagers in the current world prefer staying at home playing video games rather than engaging in some healthy physical games. 80 to 90% of people would prefer communicating with people via social media rather than jumping out of bed and socializing. technology has not only made us lazy which makes our health miserable but also made us anti-social. Albeit technology has made our lives easier, it doesn't show the emotions or connection that a human does during face to face conversation. And out of nowhere, if someone arrives at our home, we tend to forget the etiquettes of greeting the guests and the basic moral values.
technology has made our lives advanced but it has slowed down or rather stopped our emotional, spiritual, social and practical growth.
I would conclude by saying that we don't need to avoid using technology but rather have a calculated balance between our practical and virtual lives in order to sustain
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'technologies'' or 'technology's'?
Suggestion: technologies'; technology's
...the world has immensely improved in the technologies aspect. our future might witness furthe...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Our
...ly improved in the technologies aspect. our future might witness further amazing di...
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Suggestion: The
...ht witness further amazing discoveries. the sole purpose of working on the technolo...
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Suggestion: It
...new things was to make our life easier. it has no doubt made our lives efficient r...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Right
...axing and comfortable in a certain way. right from the time, we wake up thanks to an ...
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Suggestion: With
...ogies that we have at our disposal. with all due credit to the technologies in t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Technology
...han jumping out of bed and socializing. technology has not only made us lazy which makes o...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...echnology has made our lives easier, it doesnt show the emotions or connection that a ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Technology
... guests and the basic moral values. technology has made our lives advanced but it has ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... I would conclude by saying that we dont need to avoid using technology but rath...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, as to, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 304.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89802631579 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63386208524 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4255867186 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.357142857 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21642024335 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841636857375 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597199412608 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151054052293 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327473442001 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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