There is little justification for society to make extraordinary efforts — especially at a great cost in money and jobs — to save endangered animal or plant species.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In the 21st century, it's of primary importance to save endangered animals and plants species. The prompt concludes that there is negligible justification for society to make extraordinary efforts to conserve these endangered species. I mostly agree with the author, we humans are part of the ecosystem in which we aren't the only species who deserve to sustain. Perhaps to maintain the ecological balance we need to protect all the species of plants and animals who are on the verge of extinction, in a way to protect our lifecycle.
To begin with, we humans have been exploiting plants and animals for our profit for a long time. This exploitation of animals and plants has lead to the imbalance of the ecosystem. Eventually, progressing to our destruction, it is necessary to realize that saving endangered species is saving ourselves from extinction. For instance, we do find many people spreading awareness regarding saving endangered animals and sometimes about plants but the actual number of people taking action after being informed is too less to count on fingers. Being part of this society we are obligated to protect it and nurture it for better purposes, to slow down this process of plants and animal extinction we can contribute to various NGOs that work for identical purposes. If we fail to do so we might be looking at a future that we never wished for.
Furthermore, is it solely the responsibility of society from preventing plants and animal extinction? No, government, people can also contribute for the same. For example, the government can provide guidelines about which species of plants and animals are on verge of extinction, through this list local people like you and me can take up the responsibility to save these endangered species. It may be possible to conserve these species cost more than we might estimate but look at the brighter side of the picture these are negligible amounts in front of what we might save for the future. This task of protecting such species of animals and plants can provide many job opportunities for people who are interested in this work. In a way, society will be benefited by both saving nature and providing employment to people.
In conclusion, protecting these endangered species it of utmost importance. We need all these species to co-exist with us in the ecosystem to maintain the balance of it and to ensure we all sustain in time for a longer period. As a society, we should be concerned about the same also encourage government and local people to come together and find the solution in which we can keep our ecosystem intact by saving every species of plants and animals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 315, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...s are part of the ecosystem in which we arent the only species who deserve to sustain...
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Line 2, column 634, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t it and nurture it for better purposes, to slow down this process of plants and ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, may, regarding, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2204.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 447.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93064876957 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80842345746 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463087248322 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 710.1 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5889644083 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5263157895 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268386675306 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972526968664 0.0831039109588 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471965304395 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184160788637 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530713515653 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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