Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won’t benefit their future careers.
Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won’t benefit their future careers is a wrong assumption with the society at large as accepted as truth. Many courses in humanities generally has to do with study of man behavioural pattern. It will be wrong then to assert that business major and science major are not to take courses from the faculty in person, when both business majors and science major will still end up dealing with human.
After graduating many employers of labour seek for some soft skills such as interpersonal relationship, social skills, management skills, which are taught in humanities, preventing students from taking this cause is like rubbing them of an edge in the labour market. On several ocassion individuals from non humanities major who strictly took courses partaining to their field only on getting to the labour market and lacking this soft skills has to pay to gain them. I do understand where the author is coming from, taking this courses might be additional stress, but university is all about the rigor, and build tenacious diligent individous. I am strong of the opinion student be advised to take electives outside their major cause.
In conclusion, it better and more beneficial to be an individual with a broad scope of like than one with a parochial view, it helps one to fit in where ever they find themselves in life, no knowledge is ever a waste.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In my country young people have better lives than their parents had when they were young Use reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- The vice president of human resources at Climpson Industries sent the following recommendation to the company s president In an effort to improve our employees productivity we should implement electronic monitoring of employees Internet use from their wor 57
- Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student s field of study Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim In developing and supporting your position be sure t 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'betters', 'wells'?
Suggestion: betters; wells
...e their major cause. In conclusion, it better and more beneficial to be an individual...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, then, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 253.0 442.535393258 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93280632411 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67096013211 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616600790514 0.4932671777 125% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 704.065955056 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.7085271315 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.0 118.986275619 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.625 23.4991977007 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.21951772744 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.474066864629 0.243740707755 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.203893648471 0.0831039109588 245% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.225298908196 0.0758088955206 297% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273557840723 0.150359130593 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.255762938962 0.0667264976115 383% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 100.480337079 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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