To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
This topic raises the controversial issue of whether to understand the important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities. Indisputably, major cities do offer many insights into the characteristics of a society. Nevertheless, one must study the smaller cities to gain complete understanding of a society. As a result, I generally disagree with the opinion that one must study the major cities to understand the important characteristics of a society and I would argue that just by studying about the major cities of a society will not help to understand the important characteristics.
First of all, the development across the major cities of the world looks similar as a result of intermingling of various societies in which people travelling far and wide in search of better opportunities and lifestyle, making the society an urban place and not an indigenous living in the city. I would like to point out that, to discover the unique history, religion, traditions, culture and heritages of a society, smaller communities are more likely to keep the traditions through generations. To illustrate, Lagos is a major city in which people are coming in from different background and origins. t would be a little harder to have a certain characteristics perceiving by a society. John Wooden said "it's the little details that are vital. Little things make big things happen".
Furthermore, rather than focusing a study on a major city to understand the characteristics developed from a society, villages will be more sensible sample. this would be more efficient as it has developed long-lasting characteristics from their ancestors and it would really help to understand the important characteristics of a society.
In summary, to get the deeper understanding of the important characteristics of a society, one must study smaller communities rather than studying the major cities to understand the important characteristics of a society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, nevertheless, really, so, in summary, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 310.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37096774194 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44859832178 2.79657885939 123% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467741935484 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 529.2 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.0443660806 60.3974514979 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.076923077 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 5.21951772744 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265666730518 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1072911582 0.0831039109588 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086615631703 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184354952789 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854513280467 0.0667264976115 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.