To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
This topic raises the controversial issue of whether to understand the important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities. Indisputably, major cities do provide many insights into the characteristics of a society. Nevertheless, one must study the smaller cities to gain a complete understanding of a society. As a result, I generally disagree with the opinion that one must study the major cities to understand the important characteristics of a society and I would argue that just studying the major cities of a society will not help to understand the important characteristics of a society.
First of all, the development across the major cities of the world looks similar as a result of the intermingling of various societies in which people are travelling far and wide in search of better opportunities and lifestyle, making the society an urban place rather than an indigenous living in the city. I would like to point out that, to discover the unique history, religion, culture, tradition and the heritages of a society, smaller communities are more likely to retain the traditions through generations. To illustrate, Lagos is a major city in which many people are coming in from different background and origins. It would be a little harder to have a certain characteristics perceiving by a society. John Wooden said "it is the little details that are vital. Little things make big things happen".
Furthermore, rather focusing a study on a major city to understand the characteristics developed from a society, villages would be more important sample. this would be more efficient as it has developed long lasting characteristics from their ancestors and it would really help to understand the important characteristics of a society.
In summary, to get a deeper understanding of the characteristics of a society, one must study the smaller communities rather than studying the major cities of a society to understand the important characteristics.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, nevertheless, really, so, in summary, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 317.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30599369085 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41053671586 2.79657885939 122% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451104100946 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.3603123204 60.3974514979 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.384615385 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 5.21951772744 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.543704255618 0.243740707755 223% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217536709926 0.0831039109588 262% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.197011235305 0.0758088955206 260% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.392351553527 0.150359130593 261% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.212927587233 0.0667264976115 319% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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