Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
A healthy mind, soul, and body are crucial factors for students thriving towards success. Universities provide curriculum courses for learners to gain expert knowledge and become professional regarding the field of study. The list of these courses is generally specific to the learner's field of studies. Various Leadership, Self-development courses usually don't fall in the field of study of a scholar. These courses incorporate individual to build a better personal life, become a leader, and a capable citizen who can uplift society. The addition of these courses aids the study skills of the individuals.
One might argue that the inclusion of disparate courses might be cumbersome to students. There is already a lot on their plates and adding new courses seems trivial. As a result, several students fall behind and eventually drop out of college.
Most students, however, are not like that. Many students enjoy the addition of varieties of courses as a pill of refreshments. Students with a fresh mind can augment their learning capabilities and learn extensively compared to a dull one. Studies have shown that individuals feel rejuvenated while doing activities that interest them. Most students have an interest and hobbies which are not inside their field of study. Students majoring in Engineering may be interested in photography, plantation but the courses are not available in the academic courses. The extension of subjects that students are interested in acts as a gateway from the hectic daily routine, thus refreshing them.
Similarly, scholars also have made contributions in the fields of music and arts on the contrary of their major. Notably, Brian May - known as the lead guitarist for that band, Queen, was able to produce forever-lasting songs such as Bohemian Rhapsody, had a P.HD. degree in Astrophysics. Similarly, Martin Luther King Jr who was an egalitarian helped in ameliorating the society also had a P.HD. in sociology. Thereupon students can benefit from a wide range of courses as a platform to make contributions in different areas outside of their field of study.
Moreover, different courses act as a bridge to minimize the gap between various professions. To illustrate different courses of Civil Engineering such as Applied Mechanics, Drawing are added in Computer Engineering so as a computer engineer is familiarized with the basic concept. This practice is preparing them for the future as they might have to work together as a team for a project.
Although some students find the addition of different courses to be burdensome. This extension of courses has many positive aspects. Moreover, It helps scholars in becoming better individuals. Similarly, students can revive themselves and excel in their studies. This also leaves a door open for contributions to be made in different sectors. In the same way, different professions are familiarized with each other. Thus Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
- Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected However since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations we cannot permit i 69
- All too often companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees such consultants would be unnecessary 54
- Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student s field of study 50
- The council of Maple County concerned about the county s becoming overdeveloped is debating a proposed measure that would prevent the development of existing farmland in the county But the council is also concerned that such a restriction by limiting the 59
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
A healthy mind, soul and body is a a key to successful living. Universities ...
^^^
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
A healthy mind, soul and body is a a key to successful living. Universitie...
^
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
A healthy mind, soul and body is a a key to successful living. Universities ...
^^^
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... of study and gain expertise knowledge. Its where students not only gain theoretica...
^^^
Line 5, column 450, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...n be made in different areas outside of ones field of study. IN addition to this ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 172, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ness can take a course of Bio Medicine. Which in future will not only help them in cr...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 261, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Subsequently,
...ng products valuable to medicine field. Subsequently it helps in minimizing the gap between ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 360, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...fessions. There are already addition of many different courses in Universities where a Student...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Conversely,
...ps in preparing them for the future. Conversely There are times when addition of dispar...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 122, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun backlog seems to be countable; consider using: 'several backlogs'.
Suggestion: several backlogs
...n their field of study. The results are several backlog and eventually dropping colleges. This ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a boon than a redundancy. Consequently, Addition of courses outside of students ...
^^
Line 13, column 402, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun profession seems to be countable; consider using: 'many professions'.
Suggestion: many professions
...nt field and also acting as a bridge to many profession. Thus Universities should require every...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 419, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... acting as a bridge to many profession. Thus Universities should require every stude...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, conversely, if, may, regarding, similarly, so, thus, well, for example, in addition, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 86.0 58.6224719101 147% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2987.0 2235.4752809 134% => OK
No of words: 599.0 442.535393258 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98664440735 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94716853372 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7616169818 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.434056761269 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 936.9 704.065955056 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.2370786517 168% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0422786149 60.3974514979 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.8529411765 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6176470588 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76470588235 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385031231204 0.243740707755 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107230847835 0.0831039109588 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146109879889 0.0758088955206 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186791868744 0.150359130593 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136116511854 0.0667264976115 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 100.480337079 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.