Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
it is true that taking coursese outside the student's field of study can help studnets to broaden their outlook and better understand the world around them. it would certainly a good quality education experience. However, forcing them to take a variety of courses besides their focus area is a different probelm. universities should think carefully about the enforcement's effect that might detract from the depth of students' major study and distract from students' effort.
every student as an individual has a varied purpose of their study and their own ability in a universtiy. While some are interested in learning relevant field ouside their field of study, others excel in a specific field and want to dig into the primary field of study, taking other courses in a different field sounds benefitial for some student, but basically, it is inevitable to hinder the depth of each field of study during limited academic years. At least in order to respect all the purpose of students, the decision of the direction where they are heading to with their study should rest with students.
As everyone knows, the qaulity of university education is so high and every programs are generally designed for students to prove their capability and understanding of the courses via demanding tests, If universtities require the same burden of the study in other fields as their major, students are bound to put their effort and time into the courses they are not familiar with or are not good at, and it is inefficient and can distract from their major study.
To maximize the benefits of the enforcement, universities should be done in a flexible way that the requriement leave as an optional for student who are interested in the courses and consider the relevance between thier major and knowledge from different fields. Or requiring the courses that are tangentely related to their major would sound reasonable and work for every student. In that ways, universtities can provide a diverse range of a field of study for student and respect all students' purpose of study and ability.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...udy and distract from students effort. every student as an individual has a varied p...
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...of their study and their own ability in a universtiy. While some are interested i...
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...nforcement, universities should be done in a flexible way that the requriement leave as an option...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, look, so, while, at least, of course, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 345.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01739130435 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65176998587 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501449275362 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.893225296 60.3974514979 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.363636364 118.986275619 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3636363636 23.4991977007 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 5.21951772744 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286041640357 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122349873741 0.0831039109588 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541466984328 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197757954518 0.150359130593 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360340713119 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 14.1392134831 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 48.8420337079 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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