Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
The study of the students are restricted in the universities so they are unable to explore more. So their mental abilities skills are not improved . Therefore, universities should provide extra cources outside the field of study.
In the modern era exposure to the various feils is necessary for a student in order to enhance their mental abilities. If the universities teach the mundane subjects to the student’s how can they improve? Parents will complain they only score but they don’t have the knowledge about the outside world. We can see in the current generation that the students who mugup the subject is unaware of the outside knowledge.
As the universities provide a cources outside the student’s field, interest in the studies also increases. Suppose if the universities provide a extra curriculam activites such as crative drawing, painting etc. Students become more attracted to these subjects as a result absenties of student’s also reduces increasing the efficiency of the university.
Therefore it is important for a universities to provide avariety of cources.
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...versity. Therefore it is important for a universities to provide avariety of cources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 14.8657303371 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 58.6224719101 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 2235.4752809 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 171.0 442.535393258 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46198830409 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 4.55969084622 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10867694742 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 215.323595506 46% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584795321637 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 704.065955056 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7650343889 60.3974514979 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.9090909091 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35558403896 0.243740707755 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136662395518 0.0831039109588 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958856350683 0.0758088955206 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200903872421 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089670759551 0.0667264976115 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 100.480337079 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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