Universities should require students to take courses only within those fields they are interested in studying.
Universities should encourage students to take courses in which they are interested. This will improve efficiency and coherence of student for thier career and the will great success in thier respective career.
In universities, student come to study for thier advancement in particular field, if they are forced to study the all subjects in that particular field instead of student which are interested in this will not serve a purpose of being in university. Student should have freedom of choosing the subjects they are interested in and they want have a mastery in it.
When a student studying a subject in which he or she not interested in, it is actually wastage of time. Indeed, Student can use this time for achieving mastery in his interesting subjects.If we are forcing a student to study irrelevant subject according to him, we might be lossing technologist, archeologist, scientist.
When student study all subjects including they are not interested in they are not excelling one particular field which is a requirement of current industry. Studying all subjects they will become master of none.They will not be able to excel a career they are interested in.If Albert Einstein studied all subjects, world might have lossed a special theory of relativity.
On the contrary, Universities should teach all subjects to student without compulsing to student to give exams for sujects.
Some subjects should be taught to only have knowledge
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so, in particular, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 234.0 442.535393258 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24786324786 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89844421857 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 215.323595506 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504273504274 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 704.065955056 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2922880641 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.8 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310281788025 0.243740707755 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158009584218 0.0831039109588 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981963041721 0.0758088955206 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170119042149 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507526929884 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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