We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whose views contradict our own.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Learning is a powerful gift that we on the planet are bestowed with. Be it plants, animals or humans, we learn to adapt to the circumstances and situations around us to mould and grow, like how a creeper learns its surroundings and grows in the most feasible way. It is important to highlight that without this attribute of learning, we as humanity could never develop from being apes to who we are today. However, the question on the table is whether we learn more from those we share same views with or from those we having contradicting views. I disagree with the claim that we learn more from people whose views we share than from people whose views contradict out own as it is always possible to learn something new from those having a contradicting view as they can always offer something that we were not known about.
To begin with, People with contradicting views, always have something new to give. something we were not aware of before. that way we learn more and better. For instance, consider a debate competition, where we are for the topic “Cars are better than Bikes for long distance travelling”. Here, people sharing the same view shall be bestow us with the knowledge that we may already know, like Cars are comfortable compared to bikes, or Cars can accommodate more people or other points like that, but in case of people having contradicting views may give us more pointer we did not think of previously, like Bikes are thrilling and more cheaper or In case of Bikes are more faster. So I firmly believe that those with contradicting views shall provide us with more learning.
Further, having a contradictory view means there is something you are missing out on. For instance, you know that this is the best laptop you could get, but there is Mr. Y with a varying view that it might not be the best laptop. This technically means that you are not completely aware of the all the available laptops in the market. on further investigation, you find out that there are many other laptops that are better that the one you thought was the best.
However, there might me situations, where we learn a lot from the people who we share the same views with. For example, consider that I follow Hindu tradition and in this case I am completely rigid and am not open to consider any views of other traditions. In this scenario, it could be right to say that we learn more from people who follow hinduism and deny to consider any other views. Although this might be true in some cases, it would be wise to understand the views of the opposing parties and take into accounts their view points.
On a conclusive note, it would be wise to disagree with the claim considering the various way that can be explored if we try to learn from those having contradicting views. It might not always hold true but I believe it shall hold true most of the times.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 803, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... they can always offer something that we were not known about. To begin with,...
^^
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Something
...ews, always have something new to give. something we were not aware of before. that way w...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
... something we were not aware of before. that way we learn more and better. For insta...
^^^^
Line 3, column 631, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'cheaper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: cheaper
...reviously, like Bikes are thrilling and more cheaper or In case of Bikes are more faster. So...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 668, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'faster' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: faster
...nd more cheaper or In case of Bikes are more faster. So I firmly believe that those with co...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 336, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...ll the available laptops in the market. on further investigation, you find out tha...
^^
Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and am not open to consider any views of other traditions. In this scenario, it c...
^^
Line 7, column 357, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'deny considering'.
Suggestion: deny considering
...ore from people who follow hinduism and deny to consider any other views. Although this might be...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, you know, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.3162921348 212% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 75.0 33.0505617978 227% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2362.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 513.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60428849903 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52454182898 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.417153996101 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 725.4 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.8997553403 60.3974514979 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.476190476 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38095238095 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416202607081 0.243740707755 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136565821961 0.0831039109588 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101387284584 0.0758088955206 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230296479525 0.150359130593 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104589972177 0.0667264976115 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 48.8420337079 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 803, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... they can always offer something that we were not known about. To begin with,...
^^
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Something
...ews, always have something new to give. something we were not aware of before. that way w...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
... something we were not aware of before. that way we learn more and better. For insta...
^^^^
Line 3, column 631, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'cheaper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: cheaper
...reviously, like Bikes are thrilling and more cheaper or In case of Bikes are more faster. So...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 668, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'faster' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: faster
...nd more cheaper or In case of Bikes are more faster. So I firmly believe that those with co...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 336, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...ll the available laptops in the market. on further investigation, you find out tha...
^^
Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and am not open to consider any views of other traditions. In this scenario, it c...
^^
Line 7, column 357, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'deny considering'.
Suggestion: deny considering
...ore from people who follow hinduism and deny to consider any other views. Although this might be...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, you know, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.3162921348 212% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 75.0 33.0505617978 227% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2362.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 513.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60428849903 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52454182898 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.417153996101 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 725.4 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.8997553403 60.3974514979 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.476190476 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38095238095 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416202607081 0.243740707755 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136565821961 0.0831039109588 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101387284584 0.0758088955206 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230296479525 0.150359130593 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104589972177 0.0667264976115 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 48.8420337079 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.