The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates fish and meat consumption in a European state from 1979 to 2004.
It can be seen that European people more like meat than fish. In 1979 Beef was favorite in Europe and it is consumed more than 200 grams per person per week but it massively decline in 1981, before dramatic upsurge in 1983 and after that tend to fall until 110 grams per person per week in 2004. More like beef, lamb also tend to shrinking from 150 grams per person per week in 1979 to 60 grams per person per week in 2004. Although in 1979 chicken was consumed almost as much as lamb but opposite to lamb, chicken consumption trend was growth. In 2004 chicken consumption almost double than consumption in 1979. Different with all kinds of meat in the diagram, fish was most little consumed by European in each year and tend to decreased slightly from 1979 to 2004.
Overall, In European country meat was more consumed than fish. From 1979 to 2004 the only kind of meat consumption tend to rise was chicken.
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The line chart illustrates fish and meat consumption in a European state
The line chart illustrates the fish and meat consumption in a European state
European people more like meat than fish
European people like meat more than fish
Beef was favorite in Europe
Beef was the favorite in Europe
but it massively decline in 1981
but it massively declined in 1981
chicken consumption trend was growth.
the chicken consumption trend was growing.
Sentence: Different with all kinds of meat in the diagram, fish was most little consumed by European in each year and tend to decreased slightly from 1979 to 2004.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and decreased
Sentence: From 1979 to 2004 the only kind of meat consumption tend to rise was chicken.
Description: The tag a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive is not usually followed by was
Suggestion: Refer to tend and was
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No. of Different Words: 87 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.673 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.418 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 10 20
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Sentence Length SD: 10.696 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.62 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.209 0.07
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