The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2003 and projections for 2050 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2003, and projections for 2050.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the ratio of India, China, USA, and Japan population in the overall world density according to past, present, and future predictions of the year 2050. The graph demonstrates that three different bars with a unique design for the years 1950, 2002 and 2050.
An overall graph is showing that China has the highest population rate as compared to other countries, on the other hand, Japan has the lowest population percentage in the overall world population. The future and present population percentages are showing a decreasing trend except for India.
The highest population percentage of the population in all the countries is belonging to China. It was approximately 23 percent in the year 1950 as compared to India, the USA, and Japan which were at approximately 15%, 7%, and 4 %. In the year 2002, India and China's population ratio are nearly 18% and 20% whereas china's percentage has been decreased by 3 to 4 percent.
In the future year of 2050, these countries will project to lower their percentage significantly, China's population will reach 15%, the USA will remain the same at 5% and Japan population will 2 %, whereas only the Indian population will reach 17 % in 2050.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: NON_ACTION_CONTINUOUS[3]
Message: The verb belong is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'belongs'
Suggestion: belongs
... of the population in all the countries is belonging to China. It was approximately 23 perce...
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Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... of the population in all the countries is belonging to China. It was approximately 23 perce...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, except for, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.025 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80985152585 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4737084931 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.625 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205615821785 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106497805662 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456996774232 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135549962459 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242135424523 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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