The chart below compares the percentage of time Australian mothers and fathers spent helping their children with four activities in 2013.
The bar chart shows the proportion of time Australian parents spent with their children in 4 activities in 2013. Overall, it takes the most time for mothers to dress for their children while fathers spend most of their time playing video games. Both fathers and mothers helping children seemed to be unpopular.
In terms of dressing, mothers spent 70% of their time while it was only 20% for fathers. the percentage of time that mothers helped children do homework decreased slightly to 60%, and those for fathers increased to 30%. Children hardly change their clothes and do homework with both parents, the figures for both of them were just around 10%.
There was a significant decline in the proportion of time that Australian mothers spent playing games with children, just accounting for about 20% of their time, that figure for fathers went up considerably, increasing by 30% compared to those doing homework. Regarding preparing children’s beds, the figure for fathers and mothers were nearly the same, making up 43% and 45% respectively. In addition, the proportion of time that children spent with both mothers and fathers was the least in all 4 activities, not accounting for more than 10%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06532663317 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59566101886 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507537688442 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4200806238 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.444571678533 0.215688989381 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.220174687307 0.103423049105 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101857627712 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.343006038924 0.15604864568 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938638832665 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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