The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make relevant comparisons.
The chart depicts how families in one given country spent their income per week between 1968 and 2018.
Overall, it is clearly that in 1968 food occupied most of the families’ expenditure . In contrast, the most prominent sector was leisure in 2018.
In 1968, spending on food accounted for 35% of the income while housing, clothing and footwear was about the same, each accounted for 10%. Spending on personal and household goods was marginally lower than that on transportation and recreation, which came in at 8% and 9%, respectively. For fuel and power, they only spend 6% of their income.
The rate of weekly food expenditure had dropped from 35% to 17% by 2018. Similar decreases in expenditure were seen for clothing and footwear, from 10% to 5% and from 8% to 4% for personal goods. A decline of roughly 2-3% is also seen in the weekly cost of fuel and power. The expenditure on housing, transport and leisure, on the other hand, rose by 8%, 5%, and 12%, respectively. It is important to emphasize that household goods expenditure remained constant at 8% during the course of the two years.
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- Nowadays a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor Do you think this is a positive or a negative development 56
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- The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
...cupied most of the families’ expenditure . In contrast, the most prominent sector ...
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Suggestion:
...lothing and footwear, from 10% to 5% and from 8% to 4% for personal goods. A decl...
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...r. The expenditure on housing, transport and leisure, on the other hand, rose by ...
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Line 4, column 428, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'goods'' or 'good's'?
Suggestion: goods'; good's
...s important to emphasize that household goods expenditure remained constant at 8% dur...
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Message: Use simply 'during'.
Suggestion: during
...ods expenditure remained constant at 8% during the course of the two years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81578947368 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72465682817 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.048445732 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1818181818 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15968765256 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655460125601 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10850196779 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141544664234 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148221954281 0.0819641961636 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.