Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to
their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time
and attention to studying for a qualification.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some students want to study more subjects in addition to their main subject,while others think it's more crucial to focus and study for a qualification. I will discuss both views and give my opinion.
On one hand,studying one subject only can be drowsy. So if you study an extra subject that you like,you can get extra knowledge necessary for the future. For example,if you know both biology and physics,you can solve the issues between the two fields and will have more topics to talk about
On the other hand,studying for a qualification can be more daunting than the previous view,because you have to study unnecessary subjects that can make you forget about the main subject. A lot of schools may require students to study unrequired subjects,leading students to be mislead
In conclusion,I think students should focus more on their main subject rather than chasing for a qualification because you can get lost in track. While you can study extra subjects,you must focus on the main one
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, you know, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 166.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05421686747 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96212237509 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 176.041082164 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542168674699 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 99.8233132968 49.4020404114 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 119.857142857 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8571428571 7.06120827912 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327770943347 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177203410386 0.084324248473 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118651896702 0.0667982634062 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256348224448 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160376834227 0.056905535591 282% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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