The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words.
The chart illustrates comparison between men and women of different employment status on basis of the leisure time enjoyed by them.
Overall, it is evident unemployed and retired males had the most leisure time and even the females of this category enjoyed the most. More than 80 hours were spent by retired and jobless men on leisure activities for enjoyment. In contrast, women of the same category spent around 70 hours of the week enjoying leisure activities which indicates that women occupied themselves with other work after becoming unemployed and also retirement.
However, women who were employed for full time dedicated less than 40 hours of week towards leisure deeds and even, the part time employed women enjoyed around 40 hours of leisure time. Moreover, Men with full time employment gave only for 40 hours in a week as leisure time for themselves. Another notable fact is that housewives enjoyed around 50 hours of leisure time weekly which indicates that they kept themselves busy in some household chores.
In conclusion, unemployed and retired males offered most of their time for leisure and fully employed women enjoyed the least of leisure time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... However, women who were employed for full time dedicated less than 40 hours of week to...
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Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...eek towards leisure deeds and even, the part time employed women enjoyed around 40 hours ...
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Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...urs of leisure time. Moreover, Men with full time employment gave only for 40 hours in a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16753926702 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47702084104 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507853403141 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8874978821 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.375 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252038866414 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143157238594 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077268082992 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201911070956 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601227452614 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.