The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
Leisure time in a typical week in hour- by sex and employment status, 1998-99.
The chart describes the amount of leisure time in a typical week in hour entertained by men and women of five different employment status between 1998 and 1999.
With the retired who contributed whole of their life for the development of their country spent a plenty of time to relax, this is the gifts for their contribution.
At first, not only did employed part time had female free time with 40 hour per week, but also the housewives showed the amount of break time in a typical week with 50 hour, about employed full time male had more leisure time than female in a nomal week with over 40 hours and approximate 38 hours, respectively.
Unemployment and retired kept the highest the amount of leisure time in a typical week in the statistic. unemployment
who have not had occupation yet had the time for relaxing of both sex with more than 75 hours, and the retired had the time for relaxation of both sex with approximate 80 hours. After the hard-working day, people really need free time to relax, entertain and break out away from stress.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The chart describes the amount of leisur...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ployment status between 1998 and 1999. With the retired who contributed whole o...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is the gifts for their contribution. At first, not only did employed part tim...
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Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'employ'
Suggestion: employ
...ontribution. At first, not only did employed part time had female free time with 40 ...
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Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...on. At first, not only did employed part time had female free time with 40 hour per w...
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Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
... part time had female free time with 40 hour per week, but also the housewives showe...
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Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
...of break time in a typical week with 50 hour, about employed full time male had more...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...pical week with 50 hour, about employed full time male had more leisure time than female ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d approximate 38 hours, respectively. Unemployment and retired kept the highes...
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Line 4, column 108, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Unemployment
...ime in a typical week in the statistic. unemployment who have not had occupation yet had t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65591397849 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56121719242 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532258064516 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.423018917 43.030603864 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.333333333 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 22.9334400587 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353544991837 0.215688989381 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196930431128 0.103423049105 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151094266243 0.0843802449381 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221705149333 0.15604864568 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147613288969 0.0819641961636 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.