The chart below shows the average cost of monthly contract for four different mobile in a European country from January to September 2002 measured in euro

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the average cost of monthly contract for four different mobile in a European country from January to September 2002, measured in euro

The line graph illustrates the changes in the monthly charges of four different mobile phones in a European country between January to September in 2002. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that there were upward trends in most categories, except for Sim TX that bucked the trend.
In particular, when it comes to Alpha, the cost fluctuated between 5 and roughly 7 euro in the first six months, which constantly accounted for the smallest numbers. At this point, the graph witnessed a dramatic rise of 20 euro to a peak of 25 euro in the charge in September.
Similarly, regarding Lex, the cost of contract fluctuated between 10 and less than 15 euro from January to June with a low of 10 euro in February before growing to a high of around 18 euro in September. Concerning Domo, the figure fluctuated between 15 to about 17 euro in the first four months, then increasing considerably to a peak of 25 euro in July, which consecutively constituted the highest scores. Afterwards, the month September underwent a gradual decrease to around 23 euro in the charge.
In stark contrast, in terms of Sim TX, the charge fluctuated at 10 euro from January to May before growing to below 15 euro in June. It can be seen that the figure declined significantly to a low of approximately 8 euro in September.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...cost fluctuated between 5 and roughly 7 euro in the first six months, which constant...
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Line 2, column 224, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...e graph witnessed a dramatic rise of 20 euro to a peak of 25 euro in the charge in S...
^^^^
Line 2, column 245, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...ramatic rise of 20 euro to a peak of 25 euro in the charge in September. Similarly,...
^^^^
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
... fluctuated between 10 and less than 15 euro from January to June with a low of 10 e...
^^^^
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...o from January to June with a low of 10 euro in February before growing to a high of...
^^^^
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...y before growing to a high of around 18 euro in September. Concerning Domo, the figu...
^^^^
Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...igure fluctuated between 15 to about 17 euro in the first four months, then increasi...
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Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...increasing considerably to a peak of 25 euro in July, which consecutively constitute...
^^^^
Line 3, column 481, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...derwent a gradual decrease to around 23 euro in the charge. In stark contrast, in t...
^^^^
Line 4, column 68, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
... of Sim TX, the charge fluctuated at 10 euro from January to May before growing to b...
^^^^
Line 4, column 120, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...nuary to May before growing to below 15 euro in June. It can be seen that the figure...
^^^^
Line 4, column 215, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...gnificantly to a low of approximately 8 euro in September.
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, regarding, similarly, then, except for, in particular

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 33.7804878049 169% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68695652174 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81160167338 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530434782609 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.473977096 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.777777778 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5555555556 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300599792277 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122819614452 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901291013305 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17537455404 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618797517981 0.0819641961636 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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