The chart shows the percentage of Australian men and women doing regular physical activity in 2010.
The chart reveals how physically active Australian males and females in six categories were regularly in the year of 2010. Overall, women were almost physically active more than their counterparts. Additionally, the figure for women aged 45-54 was the highest while that for men aged 35-44 was the lowest over the year surveyed.
It can be seen that the rate of males exercised witnessed an only higher value than that of females in the category of the 15-to 24-year-olds, 52.8% compared with 47.7%. Regarding remaining age groups, the significant difference can be seen in people aged between 35 and 44. To be exact, the proportion of females who did activity was 13% more than males did, 52.5% as opposed to 39.5%. On the contrary, the figure for people aged 65 and over experienced an identical value, standing at nearly 47.1% for each. In terms of two categories of those in ages of 45-54 and 55-64, the rate of both genders did exercise was almost equal, at the average of 53% and 44% on each female’s group and each male’s one respectively. There was a negligible proportion in the group of ages 25 and 34, 48.9% belonged to the figure for women and 42.2% went to that for men.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...was the lowest over the year surveyed. It can be seen that the rate of males ex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72596153846 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59354837207 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567307692308 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8945778746 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.222222222 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141039163367 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744480689862 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102234845339 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162979055771 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128971130164 0.0819641961636 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.