The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
The given charts compare the three different age groups of the citizens of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and 2050. Overall, it can be seen clearly that while under the age of 14 was the highest proportion in Yemen, 15-59 age group had a similar trend in Italy. In 2050, it it predicted that 15-59 ages and elderly ages will become the top spot in Yemen and Italy.
In 2000, while elderly ages in Yemen was being just under 4% in Yemen, this figure accounted for 24% in Italy. Under 14 ages group had the different trend in both nations, which its proportion in Yemen was roughly 50%, by contrast, nearly at 14% in Italy. 15-59 ages group seem to had the similar population, which at around 46% in Yemen and over 61% in Italy.
It is predicted that in 2050, there will be some slight shifts in three categories of both nations. The proportion of 15-59 years group in Yemen will become the top spot, at roughly 57%, whereas its figure in Italy was at 46%. The elderly age still remain the least population in Yemen, which at over 5%. In contrast, this figure will go up than before in Italy, at around 42%. The 0-14 years group have the same trend in both nations, which whill fall into 37% in Yemen and 11% in Italy by the year 2050.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: it
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.329004329 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.03304718601 2.65546596893 77% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450216450216 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.7287272262 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.9090909091 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247655884145 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122938081163 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893418926461 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195152286216 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595326272433 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.32 8.06136585366 78% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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