Write about the following topic:
In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.
To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In nations worldwide, the average lifespan of people has increased due to healthcare advancements. Although there may seem some difficulties to the respective governments but advantages of having an elderly population does more good than harm.
To begin with, having an elderly crowd provides the society with the benefit of learning from the experienced citizens who have lived long enough and had learnt different traditional and cultural diversities which are not that famous today. For instance, a grandchild can learn traditional local languages from his grandparents which he could not learn from his parents as they themselves are not aware of it. This helps in passing the generational knowledge to future generations ensuring that tradition is kept alive. However, it is difficult for the government to keep track of and recognize different local languages, these add in to the cultural diversity of the nation.
Another point what adds to the advantage of having aged people within the society is their vast experience in domains like finance, business, and politics. Even today, big companies and organizations prefer experienced employees to run the administrative tasks and take key decision as it is proven that people with enough knowledge and hands-on experience tend to take more effective and correct decisions as compared to someone with less experience. Let's understand this with an example, an veteran with over 35 years of CEO experience was chosen to be a mentor for a company's board of directors who succeeded in bringing their true potential out which could have been done only by someone with experience. Experience cannot be traded for newer or more advanced technologies and governments value this. As of today we can see that almost 80-90% of the ministers and cabinet ministers in most of the countries are elderly people.
In conclusion, the advantages of having an elderly population disregards the disadvantages of the same as there is just so much to gain from the elderly people which cannot be supplemented by the growing technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28700906344 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95033320241 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589123867069 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.1022098574 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.833333333 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5833333333 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204322806914 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751606396693 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511818414659 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138053525999 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515060529263 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.