The consumption of three spread between 1981 and 2007

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The consumption of three spread between 1981 and 2007.

Submitted by gkbiswas on Tue, 08/18/2020 - 04:58

The line graph shows the consumption of three spreads namely Margarine, Low fat & reduced spreads and butter during the period from 1981 to 2007.
Overall, the consumption of margarine and butter experienced a decline between 1981 and 2007. At the beginning of the given time period, margarine was popular type of spread, which was replaced by butter at 1991, and finally in the year of 2001 low & reduced spreads surpassed both margarine and butter.
With regard to amount of margarine intake, it began at 141 gram at 1981, and it soared till 1986 to reach just below 160 gram in the year of 1986. After that, the consumption of margarine began to fall and finally it plunged to about 50 grams in 2007. On the other hand, the butter consumption was about 90 grams in 1981, and it gradually decreased to reach at 80 grams in 1986. Since then, it witnessed steady increase and reached at 100 grams in 1991. The consumption of butter was leveled at 100 grams until 1996, before it started to decline, and in 2007 it reached at about 72 grams.
On the other hand, the consumption of low fat and reduced spreads began in the year of 1996, and at that year the figure was near 10 grams. Since then, it started to soar to reach at just over 80 grams in 2001. After that, it started to fall gradually, and in 2007 it was about 70 grams.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'gram' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'grams'.
Suggestion: grams
...nt of margarine intake, it began at 141 gram at 1981, and it soared till 1986 to rea...
^^^^
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'gram' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'grams'.
Suggestion: grams
...oared till 1986 to reach just below 160 gram in the year of 1986. After that, the co...
^^^^
Line 4, column 288, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lly, and in 2007 it was about 70 grams.
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, so, then, with regard to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 33.7804878049 184% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 243.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48559670782 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32425954316 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432098765432 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.482926829268 1242% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7155172955 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0909090909 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275342916343 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129665931755 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130624919453 0.0843802449381 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215428319138 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118790773765 0.0819641961636 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'gram' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'grams'.
Suggestion: grams
...nt of margarine intake, it began at 141 gram at 1981, and it soared till 1986 to rea...
^^^^
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'gram' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'grams'.
Suggestion: grams
...oared till 1986 to reach just below 160 gram in the year of 1986. After that, the co...
^^^^
Line 4, column 288, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lly, and in 2007 it was about 70 grams.
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, so, then, with regard to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 33.7804878049 184% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 243.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48559670782 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32425954316 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432098765432 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.482926829268 1242% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7155172955 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0909090909 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275342916343 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129665931755 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130624919453 0.0843802449381 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215428319138 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118790773765 0.0819641961636 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.