The diagram below show how oil is extracted in the production of perfume.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture illustrates the process of extracting oil in the production of perfume. In general, there are ten steps in total, starting from burning the liquid to ending with gaining hydrolat.
To begin with, the water is boiled by fire to release steam. Then, the steam flows into the second container which has aromatic plants. Before turning into steam mixed with oil vapor, the steam obtained from boiling water has to go through aromatic plants.
Once this step has been completed, the mixture flows into the condenser where cold and hot water are combined. At this stage, the steam which also combines with oil vapor now turns into water mixed with essential oil. After that, this liquid is transferred to the separator where water is sorted out and leaves pure essential oil. The last step is that hydrolat, which is also known as aromatic water, is achieved through a tube.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, second, so, then, as to, in general, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88666666667 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22719554597 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.8502873541 43.030603864 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.4444444444 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0726117311919 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380265480809 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491226381433 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0568591418999 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304533714516 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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