The diagram below shows the environmental issues raised by a product over its lifecycle.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram below shows the environmental issues raised by a product over its lifecycle.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by Adler on Wed, 03/20/2019 - 12:52

The diagram illustrates the life cycle of a product and how this process effect the environment.
Overall, product’s life cycle contains 7 step, beginning with planning and designing product, followed by production, delivery and culminating in recycling and start a new cycle. These steps may have many environmental issues.
To begin a cycle, product is planned and design. This step can be the most important step in the production process by supplying new product which meets the customer’s need. In the next stage, necessary material and energy resources used for production are estimated carefully. This calculating help not to waste any material or resources. Then, product is manufactured in factories, packaged and distributed to shops and markets. These steps may cause some negative effect to environment by emit carbon dioxide, harmful substances from producing. After that, product are sold to customer and used in life. Finally, customer give feedback to supplier to make improvement for product in the next production. Some old product are disposed while some are recycled and became material in second step in the next cycle.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 47, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'step' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'steps'.
Suggestion: steps
...l, product's life cycle contains 7 step, beginning with planning and designing ...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, second, so, then, while, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45251396648 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9724765543 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625698324022 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2248237068 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3333333333 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9166666667 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106833550648 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457712288077 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304327396404 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894152591724 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023320746944 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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