The diagram below shows the environmental issues raised by a product over its lifecycle.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram presents the lifetime of a product and the influences to the environment during this life cycle. Between being designed and being recycled, there are 7 steps involved in the process.
The first step is drawing the plan and the design. next, materials and energy sources are consumed to manufacture goods in steps three. these two steps use a good natural resources as well as emit hazardous substances and CO2 to the environment.
In the next step, products are packed and delivered to shops. Then, they are sold to the customers.before giving the products to customers, the seller put goods into bag or box. these container may not be decay, so it is the risk to nature. After using the product, people disposal or recycle it. unless customers recycle those products, it will harm the environment. Therefore,cycling is better as it reduces the amount of the materials required for production.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Next
...tep is drawing the plan and the design. next, materials and energy sources are consu...
^^^^
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...ed to manufacture goods in steps three. these two steps use a good natural resources ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'resource'?
Suggestion: resource
...ree. these two steps use a good natural resources as well as emit hazardous substances an...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
..., the seller put goods into bag or box. these container may not be decay, so it is th...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this container' or 'these containers'?
Suggestion: this container; these containers
..., the seller put goods into bag or box. these container may not be decay, so it is the risk to ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 378, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , cycling
... it will harm the environment. Therefore,cycling is better as it reduces the amount of t...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03973509934 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91374171715 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662251655629 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.1187628366 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.1818181818 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7272727273 22.9334400587 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.078909967506 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0294774609801 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322302576482 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0503240493559 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240504218408 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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