The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity

Some steps how to create electricity using geothermal energy in Geothermal power plant are depicted in the diagram below.

Overall, cold water as raw material is processed in geothermal zone located in below of surface. After some steps, generator powered by turbine is used to create electricity that ready to distribute.

At the beginning, cold water is injected to underground in Geothermal zone located around 4.5 km below land surface. The high temperature due to hot rocks lied in this area changes cold water being hot as the output from this processing. Afterwards, such water is pumped up and collected to the Condenser prepared in the surface.

In the next stages, Condenser changes hot water becoming Steam which have a function to drive Turbine. Moreover, moving Turbine, which is installed with Generator in the next of Condenser, will influence Generator produces electricity in Geothermal power plant. Finally, the electricity is available for distributing to consumer through power networks.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43670886076 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87110959548 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607594936709 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.1163283595 43.030603864 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.4444444444 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283653745023 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114915830628 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150939488486 0.0843802449381 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210891857989 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.181980486131 0.0819641961636 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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