The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

The diagram illustrates the process in which instant noodles are made.

In general, there are altogether 8 steps covering information from producing noodles from flour to packaging with labeled cups.

Initially, flour which makes noodles is stored in silos which are storage rooms in a rocket shape. The following step involves putting flour with the addition of water and oil is put into a mixer and made into dough sheets with a number of rollers. After passing through another machines, dough sheets are stretched into dough strips and finally made into noodle discs.

Once we get the noodle discs, they are cooked with oil and dried afterward. In the packaging stage, the cooked noodle discs are added to the cups and mixed with a variety of vegetables and different spices. The final step is that noodle cups are labeled and sealed according to their ingredients and flavor, ready to be delivered to the stores and supermarkets.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ess in which instant noodles are made. In general, there are altogether 8 steps...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0641025641 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44010264547 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5463089911 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.75 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134536672257 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742501099468 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780372473231 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114521909807 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941704108587 0.0819641961636 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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